| Re: genuine by brazen |
9-Jan-03/1:49 AM |
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As in most cases where you are concerned - Excellent read 9
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| Re: Pain in Death by Freethinker1602 |
9-Jan-03/1:52 AM |
Impressive, but why that thing at the end? your poem is moving enough just dedicate it thats a 2 word salute,
Condolences ! -8-
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9-Jan-03/9:21 AM |
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10-Jan-03/2:02 AM |
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Dont get the point writing about something you dont know what your writing about, interesting opening but no narrative and redundant of any specific point -5-
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10-Jan-03/2:03 AM |
Very to the point, short and sweet -6-
welcome to poemranker
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10-Jan-03/2:05 AM |
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Oh my god this must have taken ages you poor thing. Have a 7 for shocking me with keyboard art
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| Re: if she only knew by ChunkyHunkyMonkey |
10-Jan-03/2:11 AM |
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I wouldn't say this is particularly poignant or heart wrenching but its faily well told and from the heart so a worthy 7, i too have written of loss (a lot)
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| Re: ice dreams by w~* ATHENA *~w |
10-Jan-03/2:22 AM |
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Thought this was a bit anonymous on a 1st read but I keep reading it and more reactions follow each time. i will vote soon
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| Re: ice dreams by w~* ATHENA *~w |
10-Jan-03/2:26 AM |
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I love this its kind of eerie very atmospheric -10
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| Re: heathen love by w~* ATHENA *~w |
10-Jan-03/2:38 AM |
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| Re: fade in by inka |
10-Jan-03/2:38 AM |
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| Re: Apocalypse by marvelis |
10-Jan-03/8:49 AM |
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better now s3 is sorted here is your fat lady .....8
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10-Jan-03/8:51 AM |
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hmmmm, worryingly committed to poetry
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10-Jan-03/8:53 AM |
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You have exploded my head, now i must find my brain, when I am enlightened I shall vote .
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10-Jan-03/8:54 AM |
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Nice arrow, does the arrow have a point?
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10-Jan-03/8:55 AM |
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Of course it does, it literally does not
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| Re: Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?! |
10-Jan-03/8:57 AM |
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Four flies on grey velvet -7
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| Re: My Brother's Demons by Istar Ohta |
10-Jan-03/9:21 AM |
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Its a shame no-one read this it deserved some critique. I enjoyed this but my interest started waning on the last 2 stanzas, its a good poem otherwise, why not re submit? heres a 6
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| Re: lost love by cherish |
11-Jan-03/2:21 AM |
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11-Jan-03/2:22 AM |
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congrats on the top 3 you deserve it heres a 10
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