liked this immensely 9

congrats on the top 3 you deserve it heres a 10

Kicking piece

Pretty Good -7-

better now s3 is sorted here is your fat lady .....8

hmmmm, worryingly committed to poetry

You have exploded my head, now i must find my brain, when I am enlightened I shall vote .

Nice arrow, does the arrow have a point?

Of course it does, it literally does not

Four flies on grey velvet -7

Its a shame no-one read this it deserved some critique. I enjoyed this but my interest started waning on the last 2 stanzas, its a good poem otherwise, why not re submit? heres a 6

I love this its kind of eerie very atmospheric -10

Dont get the point writing about something you dont know what your writing about, interesting opening but no narrative and redundant of any specific point -5-

Very to the point, short and sweet -6-
welcome to poemranker

Oh my god this must have taken ages you poor thing. Have a 7 for shocking me with keyboard art

I wouldn't say this is particularly poignant or heart wrenching but its faily well told and from the heart so a worthy 7, i too have written of loss (a lot)

Thought this was a bit anonymous on a 1st read but I keep reading it and more reactions follow each time. i will vote soon

As in most cases where you are concerned - Excellent read 9

Impressive, but why that thing at the end? your poem is moving enough just dedicate it thats a 2 word salute,
Condolences ! -8-

Justice