| Re: To You by Cha no Onna |
8-Jan-03/3:29 AM |
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Full of hostility and interesting to see your reflection on a tainted chapter in your past, I read this as no one has read it for a while and liked it -8-
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| Re: Tingling by INTRANSIT |
8-Jan-03/3:44 AM |
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Did you write this on your travels? its wild and I almost enjoyed it as much as the one where you ripped the guts from the grandfather clock, didnt like the *PIFF* bit, it just fucks the end up otherwise perfect.
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| Re: Tingling by INTRANSIT |
8-Jan-03/3:45 AM |
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8-Jan-03/4:37 AM |
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You told this well, a poem about perspective / hindsight -7-
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8-Jan-03/4:40 AM |
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Its good but I think with your imagination on full riot it could be perfect. I think ZZinnia made a valid point. =6=
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| Re: insomnia by Bill Z Bub |
8-Jan-03/4:44 AM |
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Desperation drips from the teeth of this gnarling beast, liked the overtones of darkness in this -8-
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| Re: Apocalypse by marvelis |
8-Jan-03/4:52 AM |
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I was enjoying this until you repeated stanza 3. Its got a good narrative which is interrupted by the 'his might' lines they somehow affect the flow. Anyway It doesnt deserve less than a 6 I'm giving a 7 however.
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| Re: Cat by Topaz Servias |
8-Jan-03/4:55 AM |
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For a 10 minute piece of poetry its very good, the last stanzas crap but apart from that it works really well, cats are like snakes with fur mine is truly evil. -7-
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| Re: electronically by Quarton |
8-Jan-03/4:57 AM |
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When you read this one cant help but feel quite amazed at how chipped we really are, and dependant on machines, its weakly told in parts and stron gin others but a good subject to pick up on -6-
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| Re: Backwards baby blend by Blade |
8-Jan-03/5:01 AM |
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Blade is back ! that in itself is poetry. This appealed to my Dr Evil side and I'm off to buy a blender, your pal Ranger says you want this zeroed to the point of death well my friend incase hes wrong here is a 5 it deserved an 8 but if you want zero i will oblige just grunt and its yours.
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| Re: 9/11/2001 by MuDvAyNe |
8-Jan-03/8:07 AM |
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Shit I feel really stupid, please explain the connection 'HOUSE' has with Sep11?
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| Re: Damn Americans by T'ien |
8-Jan-03/8:09 AM |
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Oh dear I fear people are going to correct you that u is spelled 'you' and annoying is mispelled also, if your gonna have a go dont leave yourself open for corrections
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| Re: Forgotten by T'ien |
8-Jan-03/8:10 AM |
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8-Jan-03/8:20 AM |
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8-Jan-03/8:22 AM |
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A bit drawn out towards the end but otherwise it was quite atmospheric, I liked the theme.
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8-Jan-03/8:24 AM |
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Not sure on this one, it seems too obscure, I'll read it again tomorrow
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Jan-03/8:27 AM |
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Original, I like the way you describe things, its distinctive well done sir -9-
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
9-Jan-03/1:00 AM |
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I'm with ranger on this one I too am sick of people fucking with votes peoples talent is being prostituted by others inadequacy and jealousy, great poem, great theme, worthy of a top 5 thats all !
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9-Jan-03/1:05 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
9-Jan-03/1:47 AM |
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Part 1 is Jeckyll part 2 Hyde, I loved the images in part 1 they were vivid, and painted wonderfully, part 2 kind of didnt belong it was so different in contrast it left me cold. Hard very hard to vote on if part 1 was it, then a worthy 10, heres a 10 i'm very tired today cant offer a very constructive comment.
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