on some deleted poem
1 Feb 2003, 4:53 AM
Beautiful, you always notice the small things we miss in our lives and explain them so exquisitely, a shame you hardly ever comment on anyones work I know I for one would appreciate your input. *10*
on wanker by w~* ATHENA *~w
1 Feb 2003, 4:55 AM
geller is a pervert he is as bent as his spoons.
on The Merry Man by Teen14
1 Feb 2003, 1:29 AM
pretty good but the line has the joy of a 1000 little boys and girls sent a shiver down my spine -7-
on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin
1 Feb 2003, 4:34 AM
My mate has a boa constrictor and keeps frozen rodents for his treats, this was one shaken martini --------------> 7
on Dancers of the Night by Teen14
1 Feb 2003, 4:36 AM
pretty much agree with JC some nice imgery here, think the 1st 3 lines of the last stanza needs a re-edit, it kind of goes a bit off there but a good read
on some deleted poem
1 Feb 2003, 4:42 AM
last 5 lines left me cold, up to that point i thought it was enchanted and descriptive, i know your a fan of imagery in poetry and you almost had it here. I dont always have time to do re-writes maybe your the same but the end of this poem needs more thought provoking lines.=====>7
on Confession by marvelis
1 Feb 2003, 4:50 AM
Reality is insanity it kills your belief in dreams, take a picture spill your wine, drown yourself in alkaline.
that was my thought whilst reading this and dont ask me why.
reactions are interesting when you read certain poems, this is good in my humble opinion however i do fear votes/comments will be split on this -8
that was my thought whilst reading this and dont ask me why.
reactions are interesting when you read certain poems, this is good in my humble opinion however i do fear votes/comments will be split on this -8
on All I Feel by brokenwing
31 Jan 2003, 3:31 AM
look up 'interlunium' on the net its about the moon. there are some beautiful latin phrases for nature check them out her at...catholicarchives.nd.eu for translation of english to latin.
for expample: falling = caducus
beautiful = endymion (who was a beautiful young man loved by the moon).
It may or may not give you a little inspiration.
Please read tintagiles work hes a great poet who paints the scene enchantedly, i guarantee you'll like the one about the bare breasted maiden beneath the moonlight.
for expample: falling = caducus
beautiful = endymion (who was a beautiful young man loved by the moon).
It may or may not give you a little inspiration.
Please read tintagiles work hes a great poet who paints the scene enchantedly, i guarantee you'll like the one about the bare breasted maiden beneath the moonlight.
on What the runes said by INTRANSIT
4 Feb 2003, 8:17 AM
liked the opening it really grabbed my attention and this ones a sticker. 8
on some deleted poem
4 Feb 2003, 2:33 AM
Having written about loss so much from experience I can offer you my empathy, what you need to do is not try and write a poem but write how you feel down in your moments of profound sorrow and then think of the most personal moments you shared and tell the story past to present, then you will immortalize your uncle and that is the most fitting way I found coping in the dark hours.
I wrote one called 'goodbye dad' please read it if you've not already, condolences by the way.
I wrote one called 'goodbye dad' please read it if you've not already, condolences by the way.
on An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Feb 2003, 2:28 AM
Deliciously evil and offensive 8
on some deleted poem
3 Feb 2003, 6:03 AM
Scitz says thanks hes had his first boner in weeks
on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit
3 Feb 2003, 2:06 AM
5th from last line, hmm I wonder why they do that, you cant buy being a nice person, as for the poem can you seriously expect me to believe that anyone under 16 would like this? and bla blah blah ( annoying isn't it when people are nasty and insulting without actually offering help, being pompous though isn't me I will leve that to u
on setting the record straight on April by poetandknowit
3 Feb 2003, 1:59 AM
and you have the gall to call my work bad, I wouldnt even wipe my ass on this boring shit
on Run Forest! Run... by Bachus
1 Feb 2003, 4:32 AM
you are mad...but funny too -7
on All I Feel by brokenwing
31 Jan 2003, 3:33 AM
that website is actually wrong its ...italatin.com/latin.html