Re: Controlling Desire by maffy	23-Mar-03/3:19 PM
This is laxitive for the eyes
Re: Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit	24-Mar-03/1:52 AM
Whatever MAffy said he got one thing right, VAIN, you are a pisspoor attempt at being vain. Feel free to delete my comment I am deleting all of yours PK why? because your a gobshite. ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, you like doing that dont you. fucking loser.
Re: Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit	24-Mar-03/1:52 AM
Whatever MAffy said he got one thing right, VAIN, you are a pisspoor attempt at being vain. Feel free to delete my comment I am deleting all of yours PK why? because your a gobshite. ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, you like doing that dont you. fucking loser.
Re: One Country by poetandknowit	24-Mar-03/1:56 AM
5 anonymous blue votes do not make this a poem, as you once said - quote: you are truly the barbara courtland of poemranker. what goes around comes around, and trust me it will.
Re: Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit	24-Mar-03/9:36 AM
You insinuate that I am Maffy and you have also insinuated that Mr Pig is me on both counts that is childish and wrong. Who the hell are you to say who I am? As for that laughable remark regarding the so called fact that you voted me in to the top 15 that is total and utter bullshit and you know it. I challenge you to find one just one positive comment on any of my poems, you will not because you havent. Also if you doid vote me in to the top 15 why not actually say something nice, how can I know you have left a good vote if you refrain from following it up with a comment, WHY ? I know why because you don?t want to say anything nice, for whatever reason, maybe the reason is you are incapable of being sincere, you are a hypocrite by saying I am a vote obsessive when YOU went on to the comments section of poemranker whining like a puppy about how pissed off you get at all the anonymous blue votes? As I say you are conceited, hypocritical prat who is so far up his own ass you can see last nights dinner up there. As for bringing ranger into this how would you like it ? this is my beef with you, ranger has asked you many times to follow your critique on his work with your help because he respects your work. And finally I couldn?t give a fuck about votes, so vote your little finger stained blue as many zeros as you like, I understand it?s a form of egotistical masturbation for you so send me your sddress and I?ll even throw in some vaseline to help you on your way. If you are a better poet than me yeah that?s your opinion, I accept criticism but when dozens of other distinguished poets commend my work, you always berate it every single time and I believe you to be highly overrated and tedious. YOU HAVE THE LOWEST AVERAGE VOTE ON POEMRANKER ITS 1.87 THAT PROOVES YOU VOTE EVERYTHING YOU READ AS SHIT, EVEN THE WORST POEM ON POEMRANKER HAS A HIGHER MARK. I feel sorry for you, you really need to get out more. By the way the only thing swooning over you is that enormous dick thats on your head.
Re: Ment to be confusing by thepinkbunnyofdoom	25-Mar-03/4:30 AM
Pinkbunny, I dont know why Jeremi pasted my comment left on the recent 'Oxywarmonger' by poetandknowit, it has nothing to do with me but sorry its found its way on to here, thats unfortunate. I have read this poem and think its a good surreal poem, 8. I was surprised to see this plagiarixzed comment, once again apologies, speak to jeremi who pasted it.
Re: We The People by thepinkbunnyofdoom	25-Mar-03/9:37 AM
Delete the comment jeremi left hes pasted it from a comment I LEFT on poetandknowits work, sorry for the inconvenience, good work here by the way, I owe you some time in looking at more of yours as you have mine --8
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Mar-03/9:41 AM
You've taken the little things ignored and made a good effort to beautify certain private sacred moments of intimacy, think you can tweak this about a bit its good but i can see loads in here. I just submitted one knowing some work is needed in parts, its weird how sometimes you can flow and create something really cool and other times the connection isnt there but the idea is, nice job anyway sorry for woffling.
Re: Awe, I'm like so shocked by horus8	26-Mar-03/12:50 AM
A bit of a shocker this one. I think saying less on a subject of war says so much more at the moment because everyones a bit paranoid, concerned and disgusted and i for one feel so many thoughts, opinions, emotions inside about this damn war and your haiku says all it needs too, a diary of the times and no hint of patriotism (I am not saying you are not by the way) , smoke this: 8
Re: Awe, I'm like so shocked by horus8	26-Mar-03/12:51 AM
atomic hopefull's - apt, very apt
Re: The grand embeddiment by horus8	26-Mar-03/12:52 AM
Behold, the man with the acid tongue !
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Mar-03/12:56 AM
tease me, tease me, tease me, tease me, tease me, When i lose control.. ..... . . .. sorry that song seemed to come into my head conjured up by this salacious number, this is sexy Z, i like to think of you blushing, do you blush? I doubt not. and those late night blue electronic screens -- tut tut wel done now i am off to rent 'two moon junction' and some 1980's mickey rourke movie, homer dribbling and crate of duff and all the trimmings 9
Re: love shall set you free by stacylynn_3	26-Mar-03/12:59 AM
love is a turkish prison. however the romantic side of me can dig this, but you got the devil beating the shit out of my angel in this shoulders war i'm having 7
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Mar-03/8:38 AM
This cracked me up, and a rhyme scheme that flows complimenting this poem. My fave line is the trailer park thing, but you could appease horus by saying anna nicole smith was the effigy? confligeration: good choice of word
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Mar-03/8:40 AM
now i must go 'underseas'
Re: I Miss You by Birdman42s	26-Mar-03/8:45 AM
you lose it a bit from : and what hurts, there is repetition, otherwise the sentiment has its heart in the right place 6
Re: My Hart by aNgElThAtLiVeS	26-Mar-03/8:48 AM
Thank you for taking the time in commenting on my stuff. This poem needs loads of work, but I am impressed by the passion you show in here, you just need to get it into persective, condense the poem, make it breathe, you are stifling all of that by trying to force too much on the reader. Try again, good luck.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Mar-03/8:50 AM
I always worry about poets typing in caps there either really pissed off about something or they really mean what there saying. Chill Pill Daffodill.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Mar-03/8:54 AM
A real pagan, you belong to the earth, this is one of those poems i bet you wrote in the moment spontaneously. you wrote it well
Re: Don't End it Again by Freethinker1602	26-Mar-03/8:57 AM
when the fuck will we ever learn? hey ? huh? love is the assassin of happiness espeicially firstlove, love hurts like a pair of brand new shoes, move on, shag her sister regardless of what sex you are.