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Free verse № 45297

Don't End it Again

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 Mar 2003 · 4 comments

You'd told me it was over Why didn't I listen the first time Maybe it woulda been easier Now I sit here alone Still in love still in pain And the thing is I know you aren't gonna be back It feels like there's no way To avoid thinking about you I love the way you look at me It's too much to think that I wouldn't be able to hold your hand It all started with laughter Some people say it was a game if that were true I coulda been over you Now I play the fool for falling for you Something inside says hold on If you feel the way I do, tell me And I won't feel lonely now

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4 comments

[5] Bachus 24-Mar-03/9:37 PM Reply
Here, hold this ( Bachus hands her a head of kale ) you need more calcium, apparently, along with some creative writing courses on how to not write creatively. Because, we're hoping you're just dyslexic.
[7] Carvaceous 25-Mar-03/2:32 PM Reply
Desperate times calls for desperate measures, I think you should aim for Bachus, throw the kelp and not miss.
[5] Caducus 26-Mar-03/8:57 AM Reply
when the fuck will we ever learn? hey ? huh? love is the assassin of happiness espeicially firstlove, love hurts like a pair of brand new shoes, move on, shag her sister regardless of what sex you are.
[n/a] Freethinker1602 › Caducus 24-Apr-03/6:01 PM Reply
I rarely agree but in this case I totally agree...and yet it's a he. I can't help it. something compromises my better judment and I want him back and he keeps on breaking it off (well it's happened twice and I'm not going for the 3rd)