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Don't End it Again (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

You'd told me it was over Why didn't I listen the first time Maybe it woulda been easier Now I sit here alone Still in love still in pain And the thing is I know you aren't gonna be back It feels like there's no way To avoid thinking about you I love the way you look at me It's too much to think that I wouldn't be able to hold your hand It all started with laughter Some people say it was a game if that were true I coulda been over you Now I play the fool for falling for you Something inside says hold on If you feel the way I do, tell me And I won't feel lonely now

Freethinker1602 24-Apr-03/6:01 PM
I rarely agree but in this case I totally agree...and yet it's a he. I can't help it. something compromises my better judment and I want him back and he keeps on breaking it off (well it's happened twice and I'm not going for the 3rd)




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