Re: Live My Death by Rich Clark	14-Jul-02/2:54 PM
I am guessing you are talking of glaucoma or blindness, not metaphorically. Made me think. Jill S.
Re: MY BURNING RAGE by MEMORIES	14-Jul-02/2:56 PM
Intense. Some cliches, but it felt heartfelt.
Re: Garden by ifni	14-Jul-02/2:57 PM
Liked it muchly! Cute use of metaphor.
Re: The beggar in me by dilips_10	14-Jul-02/2:58 PM
I liked it.
Re: Love at 4 A.M. by x311	14-Jul-02/2:59 PM
Too cliched, not very well written.
Re: Compassion by Kashi	14-Jul-02/3:01 PM
Don't believe in angels or God but the poem was pretty well written.
Re: She moves by Oddsboy	14-Jul-02/3:02 PM
I liked the first 4 lines only. Rest did not hang together well enough.
Re: Forever Untitled. by LucidRevelation	14-Jul-02/3:03 PM
Not bad! Jill S.
Re: Smile by feelinglistless	14-Jul-02/3:04 PM
A bit cliched, but still nice! Jill S.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Jul-02/3:05 PM
Good pun! (Winturd). Jill S.
Re: Sperm Donor Clown by ObiWonKn	14-Jul-02/3:07 PM
Interesting. Very bitter.
Re: The Deep Dark Light by seebergerb	14-Jul-02/3:11 PM
one spelling error (You wilderness you yearned for?). Also- mixed metaphors, don't work together- taste what you wanted and a locket around your neck? Needs work.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Jul-02/3:13 PM
I don't get the title at all. I liked - but please...Keep on going.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Jul-02/3:14 PM
Trying too hard, doesn't make it for me.
Re: Dammit by Cha no Onna	14-Jul-02/3:16 PM
The line_ Always make backups- bringing in the computer element did not work for me. Perhaps a better line- always make copies. Still, good poem! Jill S.
Re: Love by DrHardDryve	14-Jul-02/3:17 PM
Cutesy. I question the use of the apostrophes. Still, I liked it.
Re: The Beggar by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	14-Jul-02/3:18 PM
Not very good.
Re: The Fire Burns Bright (an Ode to Kaolin) by <~>	5-Jan-03/1:55 PM
Yes I am biased, yes I am thrilled! Great poem!! I echo all the sentiments! Jill!
Re: sitting at the cliff's edge by nentwined	15-Sep-03/3:53 PM
Very beautiful evocative line: clinging us each tighter to the other Liked this poem Very much
Re: My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos	15-Sep-03/3:57 PM
Thought provoking, but not great poetry.