replying on The Advent Of Monsoon by anitawit
22 Nov 2002, 9:46 AM
Similar in flavour perhaps? They were both written in the same year during a stay in the mountains (though the subjects are different).
replying on Come Night time by anitawit
22 Nov 2002, 9:42 AM
Couldn't have been one dormouse...
on Dead Poets' Society (Joke) by Yardbird
11 Nov 2002, 12:33 PM
Ha ha ha ha ...
on The Land of Back-to-Front by [mojo]
11 Nov 2002, 11:07 AM
How soon will we be there? As soon as we are late...
replying on The Black Hearted Sunflower by anitawit
10 Nov 2002, 9:52 PM
Thanks (I wanted to say this before, I'm late). I've learnt since what a haiku is technically.
on To You, In Warmer Climes by <~>
10 Nov 2002, 12:51 PM
Beautiful. Poignant.
replying on My Kites On Grandmother's Four-poster Bed by anitawit
10 Nov 2002, 12:01 PM
pretty?!
replying on Worldly Wise by anitawit
10 Nov 2002, 11:55 AM
I had a problem there- I think "doth" goes with the rhythm but not with the dialect.
on Some Things by Christof
9 Nov 2002, 12:47 PM
I must say, I enjoyed reading the comments as much as the poem.
on Spontaneous Combustion/The Moth by ellisonandrew
9 Nov 2002, 11:51 AM
I especially liked the last line and the second stanza of the poem. The last line of the first stanza does seem irrelevant, though.