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15-Aug-03/2:18 PM |
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I think this was just a way to vocalize your frustrations. I like the last three words, it means you havn't given up hope. Here's a green 10 for g.w.
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| Re: for sue (20030815) by nentwined |
15-Aug-03/2:34 PM |
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| Re: The truth about our friend Horus by Sir.Psycho.Sexy |
15-Aug-03/2:35 PM |
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I think the Kings Men better watch their backs
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15-Aug-03/2:47 PM |
This reminds me of one I heard by Poe:
We only part to meet again
Tho' mighty boundless waves may sever
Remembrance oft' shall bring thee near
And I with thee go on forever.
And oft' at midnight's silent hour
When brilliant planets shall guide the ocean
Thy name shall rise to heavens highest star
And mingle with my souls devotion
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| Re: I Love You by jude |
15-Aug-03/3:11 PM |
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| Re: knott's berry farm, jam & polaroids by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
15-Aug-03/5:55 PM |
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I can honestly say CRAP, Thanks anyway. Way the by- are you mom or grandma?
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15-Aug-03/5:56 PM |
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There's a reason I didn't like algebra-Congratulations, you found it.
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15-Aug-03/5:57 PM |
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The title works very well. you wasted alot of time on this
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15-Aug-03/6:01 PM |
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Everything He did before '80 sucked too. almost as much as this crap. But not quite
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| Re: (The vinyards of Tuscany) by Patsy |
15-Aug-03/6:03 PM |
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Sounds almost like Rome after Nero
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15-Aug-03/6:06 PM |
Damn I guess you didn't care about little sis huh?
So you surrender yourself to the fate you wished for her?
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| Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
15-Aug-03/6:09 PM |
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Why the 's in the third stanza? You had a good flow 'till then.
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15-Aug-03/8:33 PM |
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A beautiful prayer. well done
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15-Aug-03/8:38 PM |
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If he is holding you away, even slightly why hinge your emotion on his desire? All in all though this was well written.
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| Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
15-Aug-03/9:08 PM |
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You forgot to add me to your list. I've rhymed Heart/apart etc. but we all grow
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| Re: A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 |
18-Aug-03/7:44 PM |
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You know what the difference is between this submission and a bucket of shit? The bucket buddy. But keep trying, I enjoy a good laugh
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18-Aug-03/7:47 PM |
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21-Aug-03/8:40 PM |
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You should never try to fit into the mold someone else sees you in. I'm glad to hear you broke up with him. If you didn't feel a compensation for your feelings, then he didn't care to try. By the way, how old are you?
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| Re: Women have Babies and Men Murder. by horus8 |
21-Aug-03/8:46 PM |
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Try putting your points in your slits and slots and quit writing about your sister. This sucked
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31-Aug-03/8:31 PM |
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A positive piece. Well spoken and a good message
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