on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 1:46 PM
Life worth living is worth living well.
on The last Smurf standing by Bachus
15 Aug 2003, 1:10 PM
Good imagination. Kinda small for a superhero though
on play to win by peaceseeker
15 Aug 2003, 1:14 PM
casual poetry, or casual sex? let me guess
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 1:33 PM
Damn... I've been trying to write like this forever-great.
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 1:35 PM
Welcome to love, It'll do that to ya. I like your style, it reminds me of me.
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 1:49 PM
I'm already gone and this is only the fourth poem of yours I've read. damn
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 1:52 PM
I guess I'll have to freshen up on my Spanish. Keep singing' I like it.
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 1:55 PM
That's how it happens
They just walk away
But you'll get used to it.
someday
They just walk away
But you'll get used to it.
someday
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 2:02 PM
Shit.. Just avoid the blood covered wrist and enjoy that soothing night. Don't worry about those bright lights they are bound to fade till you surpass their light.
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 2:11 PM
God is there Crystal. But He gave us free will for a reason. We have to work hard to prove our love to Him, just like anyone else.
on some deleted poem
14 Aug 2003, 8:30 PM
Rough calloused hands are the hands of the man who works to support her, fear not to touch.
on Padre's Gumbo by SupremeDreamer
14 Aug 2003, 8:33 PM
well done. great emotionn.
on Between Now And Then by sliver
10 Aug 2003, 2:40 PM
Dedicated to my father. May he rest in peace.
on Have you by XangryXblondeX
29 Jun 2003, 7:22 PM
Yes, I have loved. But she didn't feel it.
And yes-It hurt
And yes-It hurt
on some deleted poem
29 Jun 2003, 7:24 PM
Not too bad bro'. Pain exposed on paper.
on Blind Walk Into Poem Ranker by DreamerSupreme
29 Jun 2003, 7:27 PM
Great, Lot's of good visuals-
on some deleted poem
25 May 2003, 10:26 AM
Fantastic, Bratsy. I guess my vote is somewhat tainted
Though- Since Uncle Johnny is dad to me. Great work keep submitting
Though- Since Uncle Johnny is dad to me. Great work keep submitting
on some deleted poem
29 Apr 2003, 9:02 PM
great job. a poet in the works... Lets see some more
"Bratsy" Sliver
"Bratsy" Sliver
on two poles are better than one by <~>
27 Nov 2002, 12:57 PM
I like it. From beginning to end.
Excellently vocalized emotion. Enjoy your change.
Excellently vocalized emotion. Enjoy your change.