Re: two poles are better than one by <~> |
27-Nov-02/12:57 PM |
I like it. From beginning to end.
Excellently vocalized emotion. Enjoy your change.
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29-Apr-03/9:02 PM |
great job. a poet in the works... Lets see some more
"Bratsy" Sliver
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Re: I'm alone by psikosis |
29-Apr-03/9:19 PM |
Suicide in never an option, I hope you aren't serious
Live is precious-- Love it live it Strive to keep it.
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25-May-03/10:26 AM |
Fantastic, Bratsy. I guess my vote is somewhat tainted
Though- Since Uncle Johnny is dad to me. Great work keep submitting
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Re: Have you by XangryXblondeX |
29-Jun-03/7:22 PM |
Yes, I have loved. But she didn't feel it.
And yes-It hurt
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29-Jun-03/7:24 PM |
Not too bad bro'. Pain exposed on paper.
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Re: Blind Walk Into Poem Ranker by DreamerSupreme |
29-Jun-03/7:27 PM |
Great, Lot's of good visuals-
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Re: Between Now And Then by sliver |
10-Aug-03/2:40 PM |
Dedicated to my father. May he rest in peace.
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14-Aug-03/8:30 PM |
Rough calloused hands are the hands of the man who works to support her, fear not to touch.
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Re: Padre's Gumbo by SupremeDreamer |
14-Aug-03/8:33 PM |
well done. great emotionn.
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Re: The last Smurf standing by Bachus |
15-Aug-03/1:10 PM |
Good imagination. Kinda small for a superhero though
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Re: play to win by peaceseeker |
15-Aug-03/1:14 PM |
casual poetry, or casual sex? let me guess
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15-Aug-03/1:33 PM |
Damn... I've been trying to write like this forever-great.
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15-Aug-03/1:35 PM |
Welcome to love, It'll do that to ya. I like your style, it reminds me of me.
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15-Aug-03/1:46 PM |
Life worth living is worth living well.
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15-Aug-03/1:49 PM |
I'm already gone and this is only the fourth poem of yours I've read. damn
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15-Aug-03/1:52 PM |
I guess I'll have to freshen up on my Spanish. Keep singing' I like it.
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15-Aug-03/1:55 PM |
That's how it happens
They just walk away
But you'll get used to it.
someday
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15-Aug-03/2:02 PM |
Shit.. Just avoid the blood covered wrist and enjoy that soothing night. Don't worry about those bright lights they are bound to fade till you surpass their light.
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15-Aug-03/2:11 PM |
God is there Crystal. But He gave us free will for a reason. We have to work hard to prove our love to Him, just like anyone else.
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