| Re: The world by hamgurl |
25-Jul-02/8:07 PM |
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You must live in the city. I live in a small community where trust is still inherent in our personalities. I'm sorry the world has treated you so.
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| Re: Summer Haiku by waltfreakinwhitman |
25-Jul-02/8:11 PM |
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I thaught Haiku was 17 syllables. I counted 18.Please correct me if I'm wrong.
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| Re: This Strange Feeling by snowing |
25-Jul-02/8:14 PM |
Work on the depth of your language'
Your rhyme scheme is basic, like mine, But I like it
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25-Jul-02/8:22 PM |
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| Re: Innocence lost by deadstar |
5-Nov-02/9:36 AM |
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| Re: i got a really big fan by Flattop |
5-Nov-02/9:40 AM |
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Nice, First comes sometimers, then mosttimers, then alzheimers.
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| Re: Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus |
5-Nov-02/9:42 AM |
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Slick- Did you get mom too
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5-Nov-02/9:44 AM |
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| Re: Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl |
20-Nov-02/10:46 AM |
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I wonder why people have no friends. Welcome to slam the striving poet night.It is a little difficult to read, but good sentiment. keep writing,lil girl
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| Re: Now I Know by BUFFY0BSESSED |
20-Nov-02/11:02 AM |
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happiness isn't a gift, it's something you earn. If you can't give it to yourself- no one can force it on you
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20-Nov-02/11:14 AM |
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a path I have seen cleared through the deadfall of my dreams. Excellent imagery.
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20-Nov-02/11:17 AM |
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you would tire quickly, I think.
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| Re: The Trail by ThoughtfulSoul |
20-Nov-02/11:19 AM |
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Trust not what you see-Go with what you know
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26-Nov-02/9:43 PM |
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Holy Shit. Been There--thank you
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