| Re: a comment on Lesson in Wickedness by eyrbare |
21-Nov-03/4:04 PM |
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it's offical. I am a dunce. can't believe I missed that little detail. gawd.
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| Re: Lesson in Wickedness by eyrbare |
21-Nov-03/8:31 AM |
yes. Also: when the ache of ancestors happens before death, cattyness can be cancelled and life dictated, instead.
bravo.
P.S. Sorry to lead you on. I'm no collegiate.
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| Re: Earth, or, When You Take Me From This Good Rich Soil by david |
21-Nov-03/5:33 AM |
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The only thing I don't like about this is its' quasi-repetetive nature. I thumbed through your file. Write more please.
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| Re: A Parable Of War by Caducus |
21-Nov-03/5:23 AM |
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Best war poem I've read in a while. Your development becomes you.
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| Re: a comment on Intersection by INTRANSIT |
20-Nov-03/2:50 PM |
the hawk was looking at the top of my head(poll) or "sizing me up"
gaze on gaze-- looked each other in the eye
grinding line-- straight ground transportation.
but do these things warrant a higher score? I know I shouldn't base everything on this rating chart, it's just convenient.
10-Q
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| Re: a comment on Intersection by INTRANSIT |
20-Nov-03/9:44 AM |
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Talk to me , sir S. When I fall short of a dozen, it always makes me ask why.
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| Re: What I know of monsters by Bachus |
20-Nov-03/6:16 AM |
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You know where the problems lie, In the poem. I feel for you bro. I really do.
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| Re: Blessing in desguise by GekoHawaii |
20-Nov-03/6:12 AM |
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awfully close to perfect.
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| Re: a comment on Fallow by <~> |
19-Nov-03/12:47 PM |
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| Re: null by Bill Z Bub |
19-Nov-03/12:46 PM |
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is poemranker confused? or has some fusible link fried?
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| Re: a comment on Intersection by INTRANSIT |
19-Nov-03/12:45 PM |
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admittedly, the assonance is a bit forced. Poll is also the top of the head.
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| Re: Mirror to Mirror by Roisin |
19-Nov-03/9:17 AM |
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| Re: Fallow by <~> |
19-Nov-03/8:51 AM |
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| Re: A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus |
19-Nov-03/6:38 AM |
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Damian Hurst? Archaeology? Can you help me refine my search sir?
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| Re: The Turner Prize by Mona Lisa |
19-Nov-03/6:11 AM |
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I like the write. Don't like the topic. You seem to do haikus well.
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| Re: a comment on Captured Moment by hummers86 |
18-Nov-03/6:25 PM |
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| Re: Captured Moment by hummers86 |
18-Nov-03/6:24 PM |
I suggest you read: A cup of tea & some company- By Cadacus
And: Fair 12s' new post.
Then RUN back to the Mall of america from whence you came!!!
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| Re: A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus |
18-Nov-03/6:10 PM |
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| Re: Being by horus8 |
18-Nov-03/3:05 PM |
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| Re: a comment on A girl named Chuck by Shardik |
18-Nov-03/8:19 AM |
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