Re: a comment on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	7-Jan-04/7:54 PM
In a flash our hero launches from his desk chair, trips on the chair leg and falls headlong into the doorjamb! note: the flash was a camera flash going off as he tries to get out of his chair.
Re: a comment on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry	7-Jan-04/7:45 PM
And if those don't work, beat it with a pipe-wrench, right?
Re: Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	7-Jan-04/7:40 PM
here's a bone for your dogs.
Re: a comment on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	7-Jan-04/7:39 PM
yes, yes. this is where the nutrient rich soil is. the back halls are the best. shhhhhhh.
Re: a comment on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	7-Jan-04/7:37 PM
I got yer twenty pardno! Bleh. It's just after being out there for so long, you realize that they do just as much damage to their image as others do. Yet with some small adjustments, alot can change. Kudos to your pops for knowing he didn't HAVE to be a driver. Most drivers don't want to recognise this fact. I seem to be having an awful time spelling tonight.
Re: a comment on Waiting to inhale (Stardust & God's Black Nostril) by Don-Quixote	7-Jan-04/7:30 PM
Hmmm. I'm simple minded. And faithful. Yet, somehow, I don't feel victimized. Maybe I should have my riboflavin checked?
Re: a comment on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	7-Jan-04/7:23 PM
First time I read "America" I fell in love with the Psycho jew-nut, as I call him. Have you ever seen one of Horus 8s old rants? He had some killers. ha!
Re: a comment on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry	7-Jan-04/7:17 PM
I agree. I also think, "why not have several tools in ones box"
Re: a comment on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	7-Jan-04/7:14 PM
I have yet to try any kind of writers block excercises (sp?).Mine usually passes within a few days, weeks, months... OH GOD!!! I'M STILL A TRUCK DRIVER!!!!Aggggg! ....and now back to our regularly scheduled programming. I see three possibilities. In no particular order, the writers block thing (s-2), a poem about the sadness of people eating dogs(I know it's a staple, to them). And the (starving viet kids who like dog steaks) which says to me,"where are the poets who like crude poetry?". This is where I raise my hand. I heard some Ginsberg-ish echos here. Good enough? I can feel my hair silvering.
Re: BreakBeat TimeTravel by nentwined	7-Jan-04/7:00 PM
igpbgh. that is all.
Re: A Kiss by devilishnutcase	7-Jan-04/6:49 PM
Leaves? I think you mean LeaDs. (May) my lips... Compact and honest.
Re: a comment on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry	7-Jan-04/6:43 PM
Truthfully, no joke intended. The falling penny is a good image to work with. And there really is a book with that name. and you can use the book AND still mature naturally. And the book is also very down to earth and will accelerate your growth. and and and and...... Or you don't have to. Ta!
Re: a comment on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	7-Jan-04/6:37 PM
and please lose the acid-trippin. it just doesn't fit.
Re: Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	7-Jan-04/6:34 PM
I hope this is a first draft. Pull a draught and pull in the laces on this new shoe.
Re: Black Beach by Caducus	7-Jan-04/6:29 PM
Something about this screams SONNET! There's plenty of material and plenty of great lines. "...white flag still blows" gives me an image of the backsides of crashing waves from the air.
Re: Down The Hall by Blindpoetry	7-Jan-04/6:25 PM
A penny is single, solitary, small, one. An excellent image to work with. Stretch the penny over your poem. Poetry aint easy kiddo. I'd lend you my copy of "Poetry for dummies", except it is part of me, permanently. I had it sewn under the skin of my left thigh.
Re: a comment on The wise by richa	7-Jan-04/6:14 PM
I see. Thank you. At least I got some of it correct. Which shows that you are getting closer to your "target". I believe that wisdom is both dynamic and artistic, however. Unless I have taken your statement incorrectly out of context. My apologies if I have.
Re: Dance in my Golden Shower by SupremeDreamer	6-Jan-04/4:39 PM
Um, no thanks. If it's all the same, i'll stay dirty.
Re: The burlesque circus clown [revised] by Don-Quixote	6-Jan-04/4:37 PM
Sorry bro. Didn't know I'd left ya hangin'. This hits my ears much better though. Who dropped the blue four is beyond me.
Re: He doesn't love me by tuthaliash	4-Jan-04/10:36 AM
Really really good. Based on the fact that Tinty-G is your referrer, and this poem, I'd say you'll be moving on soon.