Re: a comment on Cherry Blossoms (anti-haiku) by middenHeap	12-Jan-04/3:51 AM
don't forget that he somehow managed to get a mess-o-adults griped at him too. which, of course, speaks poorly about the adults. ha!
Re: A dream of a fruit-gun by zodiac	11-Jan-04/6:52 PM
Get the hell outta here Zodiac! No. Nevermind. I'll show myself the door. Thank you.
Re: a comment on Mermaid by lastobelus	11-Jan-04/2:54 PM
I suspected. I need to fire my muse. or myself. I'm not sure which.
Re: Cherry Blossoms (anti-haiku) by middenHeap	11-Jan-04/2:49 PM
This is not your average sunday night on the 'ranker.
Re: Mermaid by lastobelus	11-Jan-04/2:48 PM
People like you and middenHeap show up, and I feel flat out stepped on. *races toward liquor cabinet*
Re: A dream of a fruit-gun by zodiac	11-Jan-04/2:36 PM
I wrote about a train.
Re: a comment on Nuisance by DMonster	11-Jan-04/1:06 PM
are you sure he shouldn't pull the hamster over his head?
Re: lemuridae by richa	11-Jan-04/1:05 PM
This comes across more poetically than pokingly.
Re: Da Ghetto by <{Baba^Yaga}>	11-Jan-04/12:09 PM
Yes. I feel better already.
Re: A feast for a king by fair12	11-Jan-04/7:23 AM
"crying their history in the orbs of my eyes" Orbs bugs me. It's like saying the eyes of my eyes. Easy fix.
Re: a comment on Malaysia by Crakyamuni	11-Jan-04/7:18 AM
You're scaring me Horus. Stop, or at least slow the mellowing process, please. Be a doll?
Re: Malaysia by Crakyamuni	11-Jan-04/7:16 AM
The only thing I'd change is belly button. too silly for a serious piece. And generally speaking, hacks have no idea what assonance and alliteration are. Now tuck, Nip.
Re: I smell coffee by Princess_Snowflake	10-Jan-04/8:00 AM
http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=46373 'nuff said?
Re: a comment on The wise by richa	9-Jan-04/2:45 PM
Thank you.
Re: Dance in my Golden Shower by SupremeDreamer	8-Jan-04/12:50 PM
Other countries wallow in their own pee because they have no "indoor plumbing". Still others, who have "proper receptacles", bathe in pee for entertainment purposes. No irony there, ha!
Re: a comment on The wise by richa	8-Jan-04/12:30 PM
Shaws' quote? I have heard it before, however, I cannot seem to find it online. Which Shaw, please.
Re: Sonnet Eighteen by devilishnutcase	7-Jan-04/8:32 PM
4 for the comments 2 for the psuedo-sonnet.
Re: Waiting to inhale (Stardust & God's Black Nostril) by Don-Quixote	7-Jan-04/8:24 PM
no. soldered sushi.
Re: a comment on Waiting to inhale (Stardust & God's Black Nostril) by Don-Quixote	7-Jan-04/8:22 PM
something something ashes might be a good replacement. andante is an excellent call.
Re: Waiting to inhale (Stardust & God's Black Nostril) by Don-Quixote	7-Jan-04/8:10 PM
First of all, I know very little about drugs, how to "do" them and what the factors are involving such. So some of this poem loses me. But that's my lack of knowledge, not your poem. Moldy crackers should go, I think. Disneys' Aladdin popped into my head. Assuming (andante) is referring to winter, I love it. Had to look up the word though. I love the fleas, wool plaugue, and scarlet clouds. Over all I think it's fine as it sits. neener neener neener.