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Nuisance (Free verse) by DMonster I am nothing but a nuisance
The only reason you tell me you love me is so my death isn't blamed on
you
Your control weekens, you can sense it
It makes u mad that you can't control me anymore
I am no longer gonna listen to you, you can't tell me what to do
I am a suicidle nuisance, waiting for my life to end
Hoping it will all go away
I live my days dragging my feet
It will end soon
Up the ladder:
what a load
Down the ladder:
Over beast
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Posted: January 9, 2004 9:51 PM PST; Last modified: January 9, 2004 9:51 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7913947 Overall Rank: 11260 Comments:
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titan69 @ 62.31.23.84
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10-Jan-04/12:37 AM
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oh just kill yourself and give us a break
howbout....nah, I think I'll pass howbout u go blow it out ur ass and think bout wht u siad, ur gonna keep doin that shit (tellin ppl to go kill themselves) ur gonna have many pplz blood on ur hands, on of these days that one sentnce will push sumone to kill themself, then u won't b sayin that shit, personaly, I couldn't care weather or nt u or ne one else liked my poetry, I put it here to see wht ppl thought but not to b told to kill myself
Seriously DMonster, pretending to be suicidal is not cool.
If you had guts you'd gut yourself like a Samuari and shut your hole.
Your brains high on hamster. You obviously should pull a condom over your head and making a running jump for it.
are you sure he shouldn't pull the hamster over his head?
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