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Nuisance (Free verse) by DMonster

I am nothing but a nuisance The only reason you tell me you love me is so my death isn't blamed on you Your control weekens, you can sense it It makes u mad that you can't control me anymore I am no longer gonna listen to you, you can't tell me what to do I am a suicidle nuisance, waiting for my life to end Hoping it will all go away I live my days dragging my feet It will end soon

DMonster 10-Jan-04/8:18 AM
howbout....nah, I think I'll pass howbout u go blow it out ur ass and think bout wht u siad, ur gonna keep doin that shit (tellin ppl to go kill themselves) ur gonna have many pplz blood on ur hands, on of these days that one sentnce will push sumone to kill themself, then u won't b sayin that shit, personaly, I couldn't care weather or nt u or ne one else liked my poetry, I put it here to see wht ppl thought but not to b told to kill myself




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