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A Kiss (Other) by devilishnutcase
Touching your heart, Juggling emotions, Doting desires, I feel myself start to perspire, Caressing your skin, Falling deep within, Your beauty so breathless, Leaves my heart into a tattered mess, My mind wanders, To a simple task, Yet all I want to ask, Is something as simple as this, Let my lips grace yours with a kiss

Up the ladder: Steal my heart
Down the ladder: Beating heart

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.285714
Weighted score: 5.345782
Overall Rank: 3434
Posted: January 7, 2004 4:28 PM PST; Last modified: January 7, 2004 4:28 PM PST
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Comments:
[8] little_big_nose @ 216.207.132.135 | 7-Jan-04/6:15 PM | Reply
pretty good, it's a half-rhyme kinda thing...i like it
[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 7-Jan-04/6:49 PM | Reply
Leaves? I think you mean LeaDs. (May) my lips...
Compact and honest.
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