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A Kiss

by devilishnutcase

Member since 2004 · Posted 7 Jan 2004 · 2 comments

Touching your heart, Juggling emotions, Doting desires, I feel myself start to perspire, Caressing your skin, Falling deep within, Your beauty so breathless, Leaves my heart into a tattered mess, My mind wanders, To a simple task, Yet all I want to ask, Is something as simple as this, Let my lips grace yours with a kiss

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[8] little_big_nose 7-Jan-04/6:15 PM Reply
pretty good, it's a half-rhyme kinda thing...i like it
[8] INTRANSIT 7-Jan-04/6:49 PM Reply
Leaves? I think you mean LeaDs. (May) my lips...
Compact and honest.