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A Kiss (Other) by devilishnutcase

Touching your heart, Juggling emotions, Doting desires, I feel myself start to perspire, Caressing your skin, Falling deep within, Your beauty so breathless, Leaves my heart into a tattered mess, My mind wanders, To a simple task, Yet all I want to ask, Is something as simple as this, Let my lips grace yours with a kiss

little_big_nose 7-Jan-04/6:15 PM
pretty good, it's a half-rhyme kinda thing...i like it




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