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Free verse № 78681

He doesn't love me

by tuthaliash

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Jan 2004 · 2 comments

Those pills are starting to look pretty good All of them At once Relief and revenge I’ll show him But then he wins And loses Yeah Over my dead body

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[10] INTRANSIT 4-Jan-04/10:36 AM Reply
Really really good. Based on the fact that Tinty-G is your referrer, and this poem, I'd say you'll be moving on soon.
[9] MacFrantic 1-Feb-07/7:44 PM Reply
This is perfectly concise. Good suicide note.