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He doesn't love me (Free verse) by tuthaliash Those pills are starting to look pretty good
All of them
At once
Relief and revenge
Iâll show him
But then he wins
And loses
Yeah
Over my dead body
Up the ladder:
The Benefits of Living in a House
Down the ladder:
Alleluia
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Posted: January 3, 2004 11:43 PM PST; Last modified: January 3, 2004 11:43 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1589375 Overall Rank: 5132 Comments:
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4-Jan-04/10:36 AM
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Really really good. Based on the fact that Tinty-G is your referrer, and this poem, I'd say you'll be moving on soon.
This is perfectly concise. Good suicide note.
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