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He doesn't love me (Free verse) by tuthaliash

Those pills are starting to look pretty good All of them At once Relief and revenge I’ll show him But then he wins And loses Yeah Over my dead body

INTRANSIT 4-Jan-04/10:36 AM
Really really good. Based on the fact that Tinty-G is your referrer, and this poem, I'd say you'll be moving on soon.




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