| Re: Joshua by Bachus |
25-Apr-03/6:58 AM |
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| Re: Dear flatulance (dear lord) by Bobjim |
25-Apr-03/7:05 AM |
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might I ask why you feel the need to harass this site?
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25-Apr-03/7:19 AM |
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love the connection between mom and daughter.
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| Re: Jared Leto & Apocalyptic poetry. by Shardik |
25-Apr-03/6:32 PM |
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A MEN!!! no I mean A-MEN no really... they're a-men the best. lemmeseee... HERE it is...Dewie Cheatham and Howe. They're the best!
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| Re: Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig |
26-Apr-03/5:47 AM |
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I'm no haiku expert but I find this quite beautiful. My mind snags the petals on the thorns and they never reach ground though.
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| Re: Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger |
26-Apr-03/5:58 AM |
Very well re-worded chap. I was a little tired whn I read it the first time. The elimination of the giving up helped alot. I prefer it without the humor, however,YOU thought it fitting. Therefore it has value.
A wise poet said to me: Don't write to make others like your poetry. Write to make them think.
This above all: To thine own self be true.
Shakespeare.
Keep up the efforts, they are paying off.
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| Re: Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig |
27-Apr-03/5:45 AM |
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| Re: 3am and six cups of coffee gets you nowhere by Blindproject217 |
27-Apr-03/5:48 AM |
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| Re: Smack me by Figure 8 |
27-Apr-03/3:22 PM |
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Funny as hell. sexy too..What the hell is up with you?
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| Re: In the hushing silence... by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
27-Apr-03/5:18 PM |
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velly goot. velly nize. Next time, smack me around harder.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Apr-03/5:20 PM |
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And they acuse me of being thin. ha!
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| Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig |
27-Apr-03/5:25 PM |
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even better the third time around!!!
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| Re: Nebulous by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
27-Apr-03/5:52 PM |
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you and your big goddamn words...fabolus. 10 for the word alone.
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| Re: Ode to a Sock by JakeBike |
28-Apr-03/10:49 AM |
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Sure! Why not. and tributing Dark Angel as well. how fun. coffee fiend? you should be.
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| Re: Ode to a Sock by JakeBike |
28-Apr-03/10:51 AM |
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also proves that inspiration is everywhere.
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| Re: Torvald, the Dwarven Toast-Smith by razorgrin |
28-Apr-03/6:27 PM |
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I ate cereal. My friend ate: Pork chops, eggs ,bacon, toast, usually. I always got dropped. fun 9
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| Re: Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin |
28-Apr-03/6:29 PM |
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let me wax mine ears, first.
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| Re: Leaving Home by temptalia |
28-Apr-03/6:54 PM |
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I just wonder why it's not a little higher on the list.
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| Re: Awakened by temptalia |
28-Apr-03/6:56 PM |
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| Re: kruder&dorfmeister by rockinindividual |
29-Apr-03/6:38 AM |
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interesting change-ups. find and alternative for sexy and sultry(cliche) I like the word groovy so I'll let you slide there. rather good
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