on Joshua by Bachus
25 Apr 2003, 6:58 AM
....because you can....
on Dear flatulance (dear lord) by Bobjim
25 Apr 2003, 7:05 AM
might I ask why you feel the need to harass this site?
on some deleted poem
25 Apr 2003, 7:19 AM
love the connection between mom and daughter.
on Jared Leto & Apocalyptic poetry. by Shardik
25 Apr 2003, 6:32 PM
A MEN!!! no I mean A-MEN no really... they're a-men the best. lemmeseee... HERE it is...Dewie Cheatham and Howe. They're the best!
on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig
26 Apr 2003, 5:47 AM
I'm no haiku expert but I find this quite beautiful. My mind snags the petals on the thorns and they never reach ground though.
on Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger
26 Apr 2003, 5:58 AM
Very well re-worded chap. I was a little tired whn I read it the first time. The elimination of the giving up helped alot. I prefer it without the humor, however,YOU thought it fitting. Therefore it has value.
A wise poet said to me: Don't write to make others like your poetry. Write to make them think.
This above all: To thine own self be true.
Shakespeare.
Keep up the efforts, they are paying off.
A wise poet said to me: Don't write to make others like your poetry. Write to make them think.
This above all: To thine own self be true.
Shakespeare.
Keep up the efforts, they are paying off.
on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig
27 Apr 2003, 5:45 AM
I like this better.
on 3am and six cups of coffee gets you nowhere by Blindproject217
27 Apr 2003, 5:48 AM
not bad 'tall
on In the hushing silence... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Apr 2003, 5:18 PM
velly goot. velly nize. Next time, smack me around harder.
on some deleted poem
27 Apr 2003, 5:20 PM
And they acuse me of being thin. ha!
on The Blooding by Mr Pig
27 Apr 2003, 5:25 PM
even better the third time around!!!
on Nebulous by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Apr 2003, 5:52 PM
you and your big goddamn words...fabolus. 10 for the word alone.
on Ode to a Sock by JakeBike
28 Apr 2003, 10:49 AM
Sure! Why not. and tributing Dark Angel as well. how fun. coffee fiend? you should be.
on Ode to a Sock by JakeBike
28 Apr 2003, 10:51 AM
also proves that inspiration is everywhere.
on Torvald, the Dwarven Toast-Smith by razorgrin
28 Apr 2003, 6:27 PM
I ate cereal. My friend ate: Pork chops, eggs ,bacon, toast, usually. I always got dropped. fun 9
on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin
28 Apr 2003, 6:29 PM
let me wax mine ears, first.
on Leaving Home by temptalia
28 Apr 2003, 6:54 PM
I just wonder why it's not a little higher on the list.
on kruder&dorfmeister by rockinindividual
29 Apr 2003, 6:38 AM
interesting change-ups. find and alternative for sexy and sultry(cliche) I like the word groovy so I'll let you slide there. rather good