regarding some deleted poem...	21-Apr-03/6:43 PM
nutty, but on point
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Apr-03/6:45 PM
no. make a haiku for the utensil drawer.
Re: Noone really knows by CHRMEcountryGRL	21-Apr-03/9:23 PM
You need some concrete. To grind off that chrome.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Apr-03/6:28 AM
Whats babycham? Chambord? The changes are subtle but better. Still a fun story.
Re: The Trees by anitawit	22-Apr-03/6:32 AM
um, neeter, paki dinged me for opening with a question once. this shows me why. That is the only change. Very good. Less is more always works for me.
Re: The Days Are Dying by anitawit	22-Apr-03/6:35 AM
bingo.
Re: When the Future Comes to Pass by e1ementfire	22-Apr-03/6:44 AM
replEnished. A religious Eminem? Liked it anyway.
Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof	22-Apr-03/4:12 PM
If this ever dissappears, I'll die.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Apr-03/7:03 PM
The easterly wind carries much weight. When it gets where it is going it may carry hate. Tread lightly on foreign land. Say, I tweaked (my wife) care to peek? She likes it when I tweak her.
Re: suck fucker punch by wordho	23-Apr-03/5:49 AM
the short uncapped sentences really bring out the anger/frustration. interesting tool you have there. or lack thereof.
Re: isms and ities by Amelia	23-Apr-03/2:10 PM
Don't ever stop reaching.....
Re: spring by <~>	23-Apr-03/2:14 PM
well.... so much for beer bottles.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Apr-03/5:57 AM
I must be missing something. S-3 and the last sum it up for me. It's good. It's you. I just think you are capable of more.;)
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Apr-03/6:00 AM
drop the (s) from insomniac. Seems pretty beefy otherwise.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Apr-03/6:06 AM
Drats! I love the beat. The seeming repetetive nature of the words kills me. Trim and blend, I would recommend.
Re: Jenny Jones, Jenny Jones by bondjedi	24-Apr-03/6:10 AM
Do all of these shows. together.
Re: Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger	24-Apr-03/5:14 PM
Nice to know you've got a coach. The woodsman part seemed humorous, to me. And the knigdom manager made it seem like you gave up. Just my view. I'm rather blind at the moment.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Apr-03/5:45 PM
Ignore me. I'm polluted and need to clear my head.
Re: I Speak of Expanses by anitawit	25-Apr-03/6:44 AM
Lines 2 and 7 seem a wee off beat. but it's quite enjoyable.
Re: Landscapes In The Sky by anitawit	25-Apr-03/6:49 AM
I think myriad(s). I think when you wrote this, you sat down and wrote without thinking, just wrote. and it works. 8 I think the other is better because you put work into it. both are swell.