poemranker ::20 most recent comments by -=SeTTle=- (201-220)

Comments by-=SeTTle=-, 201–220 back. Include replies

on Something in the way by nopal 27 Oct 2002, 6:53 PM
This poem is not total garbage and I even enjoyed it.
on Truths by Nicholas Jones 26 Oct 2002, 9:23 AM
Garbage
on untitled2 by ThreeFourSix 27 Oct 2002, 6:55 PM
not clever enough to work. Unless one "gets it" as soon as they read it, you can assume you haven't been clear enough. Why not "and when lust is a must / trust turns to dust"? Granted it's a bit of a cliche but it's a silly poem.
on The First Poem by jrtails 27 Oct 2002, 6:57 PM
The purpose of poetry is not even to convey *a* mood, certainly not your fucking mood. You know, this goes to show how clueless most of the poets here are. Now, since the poem is so hilarious I will assume that this is a satire of bad poets and haiku in general. 9
on glue by chinstrap 27 Oct 2002, 6:39 PM
Yeah except for any thin paper or foil. And it's garbage for non-porous materials. And it dries rigid which makes it useless for gluing materials which are under any stresses (like wood, for instance). All your needs? You must go through a lot of fucking construction paper and glitter you fucking pansy.
on Another poem by Mutant_X 27 Oct 2002, 6:40 PM
This is like meta-angst. Pretty interesting stuff.
on why? by little_angel_maria 27 Oct 2002, 12:06 AM
Thou dosth protest too much.
on New Hope by brazen 27 Oct 2002, 6:42 PM
The phrase "strong as an oak" is a really annoying cliche. Try "permanent as a conifer" or something.
on Society's Sharades by New Life Drug 27 Oct 2002, 6:45 PM
IT'S MY LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIFE AND IT'S NOW OR NEVER - I DON'T WANNA *LIVE* FOR-EVER - I JUST WANNA LIVE WHILE I'M ALIVE.....IT'S...MY....LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111
on Nothin lasts by Mutant_X 27 Oct 2002, 6:48 PM
Sincerity alone is almost never enough for a poem to go on - this is an exception. Excellent work, try expanding the range of subject matters which you right about - don't just write about what you most strongly feel.
on Untitled by greym0on 27 Oct 2002, 6:50 PM
Totally excellent. Not justreadable but very interesting - I don't think I've ever read anything with much in common with this poem. Unusual sentiment.
on Gaze by AuntyM 27 Oct 2002, 6:52 PM
Crisp - overused, sun does not reflect on glass bevel to make rainbow, it refracts, the soul is not the sort of concrete entity with which strong haiku are built.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 26 Oct 2002, 11:27 PM
My poem "Apples are Oranges" is an experiment intended to test the length=high score hypothesis.
on Surpass the Dream by darkhelmet10 26 Oct 2002, 11:32 PM
I'd try to learn to stand on your own two feet before you rely on someone else's.
on some deleted poem 26 Oct 2002, 11:33 PM
You obviously suck at everything you have ever tried to do.
on some deleted poem 25 Oct 2002, 10:50 PM
Why lathe?? Lathe's make a lot of noise. You can't accidentally leave a lathe on. Bandsaws on the otherhand look identical when stopped or in motion - he could have forgotten to depress the brake pedeal of the bandsaw! Try it aloud!
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 25 Oct 2002, 10:57 PM
Either you are brilliant or your school requires you to take a lot of courses you can goof off in. "(Just call it an AIDSketeer's hunch.)" was especially good.
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 25 Oct 2002, 11:02 PM
So wait - all you have to do to make the worst poem the best poem is make it a great deal longer??? Also - the phrase "fine rhymes" could become a very funny line somewhere (these fine wines/Jean Charles, you fool, don't you spill a precious drop/Jean Charles, you klutz that is the poisoned crouton/Jean Charles, you idiot, fetch the mop before His Highness awakens from his Royal nap)
on The wonderful happy relationship between two wonderful and caring people by Dark Angle 27 Oct 2002, 12:04 AM
THIS POEM FUCKING ROCKS!
on some deleted poem 26 Oct 2002, 9:21 AM
Sugar