regarding some deleted poem...	25-Oct-02/10:50 PM
Why lathe?? Lathe's make a lot of noise. You can't accidentally leave a lathe on. Bandsaws on the otherhand look identical when stopped or in motion - he could have forgotten to depress the brake pedeal of the bandsaw! Try it aloud!
Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	25-Oct-02/10:57 PM
Either you are brilliant or your school requires you to take a lot of courses you can goof off in. "(Just call it an AIDSketeer's hunch.)" was especially good.
Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	25-Oct-02/11:02 PM
So wait - all you have to do to make the worst poem the best poem is make it a great deal longer??? Also - the phrase "fine rhymes" could become a very funny line somewhere (these fine wines/Jean Charles, you fool, don't you spill a precious drop/Jean Charles, you klutz that is the poisoned crouton/Jean Charles, you idiot, fetch the mop before His Highness awakens from his Royal nap)
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Oct-02/9:21 AM
Sugar
Re: Truths by Nicholas Jones	26-Oct-02/9:23 AM
Garbage
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	26-Oct-02/11:27 PM
My poem "Apples are Oranges" is an experiment intended to test the length=high score hypothesis.
Re: Surpass the Dream by darkhelmet10	26-Oct-02/11:32 PM
I'd try to learn to stand on your own two feet before you rely on someone else's.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Oct-02/11:33 PM
You obviously suck at everything you have ever tried to do.
Re: The wonderful happy relationship between two wonderful and caring people by Dark Angle	27-Oct-02/12:04 AM
THIS POEM FUCKING ROCKS!
Re: why? by little_angel_maria	27-Oct-02/12:06 AM
Thou dosth protest too much.
Re: glue by chinstrap	27-Oct-02/6:39 PM
Yeah except for any thin paper or foil. And it's garbage for non-porous materials. And it dries rigid which makes it useless for gluing materials which are under any stresses (like wood, for instance). All your needs? You must go through a lot of fucking construction paper and glitter you fucking pansy.
Re: Another poem by Mutant_X	27-Oct-02/6:40 PM
This is like meta-angst. Pretty interesting stuff.
Re: New Hope by brazen	27-Oct-02/6:42 PM
The phrase "strong as an oak" is a really annoying cliche. Try "permanent as a conifer" or something.
Re: Society's Sharades by New Life Drug	27-Oct-02/6:45 PM
IT'S MY LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIFE AND IT'S NOW OR NEVER - I DON'T WANNA *LIVE* FOR-EVER - I JUST WANNA LIVE WHILE I'M ALIVE.....IT'S...MY....LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111
Re: Nothin lasts by Mutant_X	27-Oct-02/6:48 PM
Sincerity alone is almost never enough for a poem to go on - this is an exception. Excellent work, try expanding the range of subject matters which you right about - don't just write about what you most strongly feel.
Re: Untitled by greym0on	27-Oct-02/6:50 PM
Totally excellent. Not justreadable but very interesting - I don't think I've ever read anything with much in common with this poem. Unusual sentiment.
Re: Gaze by AuntyM	27-Oct-02/6:52 PM
Crisp - overused, sun does not reflect on glass bevel to make rainbow, it refracts, the soul is not the sort of concrete entity with which strong haiku are built.
Re: Something in the way by nopal	27-Oct-02/6:53 PM
This poem is not total garbage and I even enjoyed it.
Re: untitled2 by ThreeFourSix	27-Oct-02/6:55 PM
not clever enough to work. Unless one "gets it" as soon as they read it, you can assume you haven't been clear enough. Why not "and when lust is a must / trust turns to dust"? Granted it's a bit of a cliche but it's a silly poem.
Re: The First Poem by jrtails	27-Oct-02/6:57 PM
The purpose of poetry is not even to convey *a* mood, certainly not your fucking mood. You know, this goes to show how clueless most of the poets here are. Now, since the poem is so hilarious I will assume that this is a satire of bad poets and haiku in general. 9