on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
27 Oct 2002, 7:08 PM
This is one of those time ASCII art is needed.
on Reptiles & Dust - Part One by Wulf
27 Oct 2002, 7:17 PM
Too long/not interesting enough. You'll notice that most tolerable long poetry has a narrative or something to hold one's interesting. Make it very good very quick and keep it good if you want me to keep reading. Good luck.
on wax by New Life Drug
27 Oct 2002, 7:37 PM
WHAT
on Sympathy for a Pig by phbiscuit
27 Oct 2002, 7:13 PM
ha ha ha
on The TRust That Was Unreal (by WOOTNESS) by xanatos
27 Oct 2002, 7:03 PM
I saw someone who looked exactly like Chris Elliot today but he was selling postcards and knicknacks.
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2002, 7:01 PM
ON AND ON AND ON
Do not ASSUME that the reader cares - in all human endeavors involving and AUDIENCE, such as ART, POETRY and MUSIC to name a few, you have to somehow make us GIVE A SHIT right off the bat. It is quite OBNOXIOUS to PRESUME that since you are the author of such wonderfully heartfelt poetry we should ACTUALLY PAY ATTENTION. Your chances of reaching the audience are about as good as your chances of reaching the BOY/GIRL/DOG/CAT that RAN AWAY FROM YOU with a POEM.
Do not ASSUME that the reader cares - in all human endeavors involving and AUDIENCE, such as ART, POETRY and MUSIC to name a few, you have to somehow make us GIVE A SHIT right off the bat. It is quite OBNOXIOUS to PRESUME that since you are the author of such wonderfully heartfelt poetry we should ACTUALLY PAY ATTENTION. Your chances of reaching the audience are about as good as your chances of reaching the BOY/GIRL/DOG/CAT that RAN AWAY FROM YOU with a POEM.
on Free to Not Know Me by jsab78
27 Oct 2002, 7:05 PM
Rhyme very forced. Make it mean something or don't rhyme.
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2002, 7:07 PM
1. Unclear, hard to understand. 2. WHO LET OPRAH IN?? 3. Make it sound less like Dr. Phil. 4. Reflect on 'the point' of this poem existing, and then rewrite it.
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2002, 7:08 PM
NUGHHHHHHH JERK JERK JERK LOOK I MADE A POEM
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2002, 7:09 PM
Will you be my..........SMOOTH BUDDY?
on Meaning........ by Hispanic_gurl2004
27 Oct 2002, 7:10 PM
Tu poetry es muy tanto y taco, verdad??????????????//
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2002, 7:11 PM
I thought I already voted/commented on this garbage.
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2002, 7:12 PM
Clever, but not clever enough. Amusing but potentially hilarious. Work on it!!!111
on A Well Worth Wait by savannah
27 Oct 2002, 7:12 PM
I thought you made tons of porn movies and died??? But you really went underground to practice your poetry??
on Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones
27 Oct 2002, 7:14 PM
The images are good. Perhaps you should compare it to my recent poem "The Story of Randal Pants-Jones". I almost feel guilty about now that I enjoyed some of your work.
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2002, 7:15 PM
This is one of the best poems I've read on Poemranker. Hilarious, well executed, tragic...hilarious. Good Show.
on Endymion Dead by vulcan
27 Oct 2002, 7:16 PM
LOOK AT ME I'M LIKE A FUCKING CYBER-TOLKEIN
on Just the Way by w~* ATHENA *~w
27 Oct 2002, 7:03 PM
If you were a boy you'd be so fucking gay. 8
on Untitled by LucidRevelation
27 Oct 2002, 7:01 PM
gsdjkdsl;sdljfkjfsd not bad