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27-Oct-02/7:01 PM |
ON AND ON AND ON
Do not ASSUME that the reader cares - in all human endeavors involving and AUDIENCE, such as ART, POETRY and MUSIC to name a few, you have to somehow make us GIVE A SHIT right off the bat. It is quite OBNOXIOUS to PRESUME that since you are the author of such wonderfully heartfelt poetry we should ACTUALLY PAY ATTENTION. Your chances of reaching the audience are about as good as your chances of reaching the BOY/GIRL/DOG/CAT that RAN AWAY FROM YOU with a POEM.
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| Re: Untitled by LucidRevelation |
27-Oct-02/7:01 PM |
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gsdjkdsl;sdljfkjfsd not bad
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| Re: The TRust That Was Unreal (by WOOTNESS) by xanatos |
27-Oct-02/7:03 PM |
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I saw someone who looked exactly like Chris Elliot today but he was selling postcards and knicknacks.
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| Re: Just the Way by w~* ATHENA *~w |
27-Oct-02/7:03 PM |
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If you were a boy you'd be so fucking gay. 8
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| Re: Gutless by temptalia |
27-Oct-02/7:04 PM |
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ha ha love the title. I suppose being gutless you also be anusless.
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| Re: Free to Not Know Me by jsab78 |
27-Oct-02/7:05 PM |
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Rhyme very forced. Make it mean something or don't rhyme.
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27-Oct-02/7:07 PM |
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1. Unclear, hard to understand. 2. WHO LET OPRAH IN?? 3. Make it sound less like Dr. Phil. 4. Reflect on 'the point' of this poem existing, and then rewrite it.
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| Re: My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus |
27-Oct-02/7:08 PM |
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This is one of those time ASCII art is needed.
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27-Oct-02/7:08 PM |
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NUGHHHHHHH JERK JERK JERK LOOK I MADE A POEM
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27-Oct-02/7:09 PM |
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Will you be my..........SMOOTH BUDDY?
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| Re: Meaning........ by Hispanic_gurl2004 |
27-Oct-02/7:10 PM |
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Tu poetry es muy tanto y taco, verdad??????????????//
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27-Oct-02/7:11 PM |
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I thought I already voted/commented on this garbage.
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27-Oct-02/7:12 PM |
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Clever, but not clever enough. Amusing but potentially hilarious. Work on it!!!111
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| Re: A Well Worth Wait by savannah |
27-Oct-02/7:12 PM |
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I thought you made tons of porn movies and died??? But you really went underground to practice your poetry??
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| Re: Sympathy for a Pig by phbiscuit |
27-Oct-02/7:13 PM |
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| Re: Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones |
27-Oct-02/7:14 PM |
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The images are good. Perhaps you should compare it to my recent poem "The Story of Randal Pants-Jones". I almost feel guilty about now that I enjoyed some of your work.
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27-Oct-02/7:15 PM |
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This is one of the best poems I've read on Poemranker. Hilarious, well executed, tragic...hilarious. Good Show.
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| Re: Endymion Dead by vulcan |
27-Oct-02/7:16 PM |
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LOOK AT ME I'M LIKE A FUCKING CYBER-TOLKEIN
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| Re: Reptiles & Dust - Part One by Wulf |
27-Oct-02/7:17 PM |
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Too long/not interesting enough. You'll notice that most tolerable long poetry has a narrative or something to hold one's interesting. Make it very good very quick and keep it good if you want me to keep reading. Good luck.
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| Re: wax by New Life Drug |
27-Oct-02/7:37 PM |
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