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Meaning........ (Free verse) by Hispanic_gurl2004
Every night i dream about you Every since the day i met you I cant get you out of my mind Theres never a day that passes by That i dont think of you I'am afaird to let My feelings show I need a guy like you I desever a try No one makes me feel The way you do Your always there for me Iam praying for the day You would be mine All though loneniess has be a friend of mines Ill never break your heart My heart is crying out for you The end

Up the ladder: Kiss Me
Down the ladder: Nitemareweaver

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.4285715
Weighted score: 4.3084364
Overall Rank: 13120
Posted: October 5, 2002 7:06 PM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2002 7:06 PM PDT
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Comments:
[5] darkhelmet10 @ 68.105.238.28 | 27-Oct-02/5:32 AM | Reply
a lot of thought into it, but it culd use a little structure work, but since its just basic free verse its ok
[3] -=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.49.69 | 27-Oct-02/7:10 PM | Reply
Tu poetry es muy tanto y taco, verdad??????????????//
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