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Meaning........ (Free verse) by Hispanic_gurl2004

Every night i dream about you Every since the day i met you I cant get you out of my mind Theres never a day that passes by That i dont think of you I'am afaird to let My feelings show I need a guy like you I desever a try No one makes me feel The way you do Your always there for me Iam praying for the day You would be mine All though loneniess has be a friend of mines Ill never break your heart My heart is crying out for you The end

darkhelmet10 27-Oct-02/5:32 AM
a lot of thought into it, but it culd use a little structure work, but since its just basic free verse its ok




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