on I smell coffee by Princess_Snowflake
14 Mar 2007, 3:01 PM
grating due to repetition and grammatically incorrect.
on Inspire Me by Blindpoetry
14 Mar 2007, 3:02 PM
Good Lord, this is angsty. Sounds like lyrics for an emo band.
on A Fake Hollywood by Blindpoetry
14 Mar 2007, 3:05 PM
Your irritating rhyme scheme makes this nearly unreadable.
on Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry
15 Mar 2007, 10:22 AM
Learn to spell. While you're at it, learn to write good poetry.
on WHY DAD?WHY? by RION12
15 Mar 2007, 10:23 AM
I'm sorry about your dad and all, but the poem isn't that good.
on gerbil by betty swallox
15 Mar 2007, 10:08 AM
The rhyme scheme is a-a-b-b-a. This doesn't fit form, it's a-a-b-b-b. Yeah, and it's not very good.
on Two More Cunts Who Are One Cunt by mr cunt
15 Mar 2007, 10:10 AM
This is so stupid.
on Through Your Frown by Blindpoetry
15 Mar 2007, 10:12 AM
No wonder you're lonely, your poetry is ass.
on No Love by Blindpoetry
15 Mar 2007, 10:13 AM
You wrote a beautiful song? I'm shocked! Are you capable of such things?
on When Fairy Tales Forgive Us by J.B. Manning
15 Mar 2007, 10:13 AM
This could probably be condensed into something vaguely interesting; as it is it's a little long.
on Just A Dream by Blindpoetry
15 Mar 2007, 10:14 AM
You're very right: 'Not good - is my expectation!'
on Blind Settlement by Blindpoetry
15 Mar 2007, 10:15 AM
I just hate your poetry.
on Junky Dreaming by J.B. Manning
15 Mar 2007, 10:16 AM
I love the first two lines. The rest... meh.