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No Love (Pimple) by Blindpoetry
My Heart You've Forsaken My Heart You've Taken My Heart You Stole From Me Never To Be Let Free This I Feel Is Certain You Never Loved Me You Just Thought You Just Thought You Knew But Answers You Would Find Out Days - In Just A Few So Why Did You Let Me Live A Lie? It Hurts Worst Knowing You Waited So Long Even After I Wrote That Beautiful Song You Kept It A Secret You Just Made It Worse By Waiting What Were You Thinking? What Were You Thinking? Instead Of Being Responsible - You Were Freaking!!!!

Up the ladder: salvage
Down the ladder: untitled

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8333335
Weighted score: 4.9551764
Overall Rank: 8730
Posted: January 18, 2004 1:21 PM PST; Last modified: January 18, 2004 1:21 PM PST
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[n/a] cheese.doodles @ 70.52.170.79 | 15-Mar-07/10:13 AM | Reply
You wrote a beautiful song? I'm shocked! Are you capable of such things?
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