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WHY DAD?WHY? (Free verse) by RION12 I don't know why i try.
I want you to be there for me.
You never are as much as i want you to.
You act as if i'm not a part of your life!
I can't believe i cried for you!
Of all people it was you!
Why dad?!
Why?!
That is my question.
The question you never answer.
All the things you gave me mean nothing to me now!
I want to take them all and throw them away!
In your eyes you might not see this way-but i do.
This is how i feel.
Why dad?
Why?
Up the ladder:
Stepperstapper
Down the ladder:
Pain
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Posted: March 18, 2005 8:06 PM PST; Last modified: March 18, 2005 8:06 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7854347 Overall Rank: 11314 Comments:
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thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 4.225.141.102
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19-Mar-05/7:44 PM
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I'm normally all about the emotional poems, but honestly? If this was pimple I might have cut you enough slack to give this a 5. As is, a 2. All you've done is bitch at someone whom I seriously doubt will read this. The rest of us, don't need to see this.
You should travel back in time 15 years and start a grunge band.
I'm sorry about your dad and all, but the poem isn't that good.
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