| Re: Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe |
19-Feb-08/5:39 PM |
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It feels like a congregational in the church of hippie love, yes!
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| Re: walls by Mutant_X |
29-Mar-07/10:19 PM |
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I won't waste another moment on your dribble
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| Re: Jeeves Garcia by Crakyamuni |
21-Aug-06/8:55 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Over beast by Crakyamuni |
20-Aug-06/4:36 PM |
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Ok. Can you be my coach. I need a coach. A british coach with big words and an in depth view of the inner workings of Narnia or Harry Potter. Really.
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| Re: The Pole and the Shadow by Dovina |
20-Aug-06/4:07 PM |
This feels like lightning in a bottle/ pure soliloquy.
vibrant beautiful thank you
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| Re: The Death of Many Octopi by tianyi |
16-Sep-05/10:45 PM |
Viceral.
Not more much to say. ARt. subje-C---tiv--v.
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| Re: Insanity by Lifeboatman |
16-Sep-05/10:43 PM |
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| Re: a comment on modern death(Debuffeted) by Crakyamuni |
9-Sep-05/9:21 PM |
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Yes New Orleans is a sad reflection on why cartoons need to be re-embraced. We sad heart filled types are getting all Anthropomorphic on our brothers and sisters!? What the hell do cartoons have to do with anything? A schizoid moment. Can I get an assasination attempt? Amen. Tom and Jerry everyone.
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| Re: A Portrait of Antonio Machado (Edit) by Sasha |
8-Sep-05/12:46 PM |
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I enjoyed this gesture of the traditional. You made me want to bust out my rosary.
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| Re: Internet Junkie by cuddlytiger17 |
8-Sep-05/12:33 PM |
The last four lines ring of something beyond the screen, I like that, links, ties, bonds, slavery!
Not in a kinked out way, but deeper.
Cudos lady.
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| Re: Beneath The Undertow by longships |
8-Sep-05/11:00 AM |
Whats with the boats, and water stuff? Television is taking over your minds. Mankinds number one poison, TV.
I'm affected, goddamn I'm affected.
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| Re: The Scout by wilco |
8-Sep-05/10:56 AM |
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It's interesting to see natures reactions to our debauchery. The image of the wolves retaking the land strikes very poignantly, check out my edit of modern death. It's been changed quite a bit.
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| Re: a comment on modern death(Debuffeted) by Crakyamuni |
8-Sep-05/10:39 AM |
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Thanks. It's interesting to see , at least in my perception, a parralell to your last submission, "Scout", in this piece o mine. Perhaps New Orleans really has effected us all, no doubt in me. Your comments are always appreciated, I respect your work. I'm not certain what this needs, outside of the obvious hack lines, which scream out in pain. I know nothing of poems, many will agree.
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| Re: His homage to the sea by Beyond_Dreams |
6-Sep-05/10:55 AM |
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| Re: His homage to the sea by Beyond_Dreams |
6-Sep-05/10:55 AM |
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This reads like some childs diary entry, and it bores the life out of me. I need a nap.
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| Re: yet another what if poem by shadows |
27-May-05/10:57 AM |
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| Re: yet another what if poem by shadows |
27-May-05/10:56 AM |
I'm still laughing about the name lintyweenis!
ok ok sorry. Happiness is a warm something.
thats it.
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| Re: Parrallelogram Perry Como by Crakyamuni |
27-May-05/10:54 AM |
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| Re: Beetwen by Dovina |
7-Mar-05/11:37 AM |
Who's that folkish painter in the bronx, a latin man? That guy paints with words sometimes to instill the point that our minds have the amazing ability to organize chaos. I like the the concept at the end.
I thnk this is nice.
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| Re: Hunter Thompson, In The Off Beat Chance Of Cunnilingus by horus8 |
23-Feb-05/7:58 PM |
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Honestly I'm illiterate, but goddamn, this was an inspiration. I have never read anything as good on this site. This may be an insult to you blue bloods, but I'm in love with this poem.
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