| Re: yet another what if poem by shadows |
27-May-05/10:56 AM |
I'm still laughing about the name lintyweenis!
ok ok sorry. Happiness is a warm something.
thats it.
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| Re: yet another what if poem by shadows |
27-May-05/10:57 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Aug-05/9:04 AM |
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You joyfully got my attention with your obvious dislike of my poetry. Tell me, was it completely necessary to give all my poems zeros? It seems to me you might have been impressed. Nice try on this poem rockmage but I think you need to get laid buddy.
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| Re: His homage to the sea by Beyond_Dreams |
6-Sep-05/10:55 AM |
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This reads like some childs diary entry, and it bores the life out of me. I need a nap.
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| Re: His homage to the sea by Beyond_Dreams |
6-Sep-05/10:55 AM |
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| Re: The Scout by wilco |
8-Sep-05/10:56 AM |
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It's interesting to see natures reactions to our debauchery. The image of the wolves retaking the land strikes very poignantly, check out my edit of modern death. It's been changed quite a bit.
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8-Sep-05/10:57 AM |
It's like mis informed D
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| Re: Beneath The Undertow by longships |
8-Sep-05/11:00 AM |
Whats with the boats, and water stuff? Television is taking over your minds. Mankinds number one poison, TV.
I'm affected, goddamn I'm affected.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Sep-05/12:24 PM |
For claiming to be an artist.
What? Sculpture? I might switch to fecal matter you know, sort of an Transylvanian-provera feel, it would suit your faux-poe masturbation quite nicely.
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| Re: Internet Junkie by cuddlytiger17 |
8-Sep-05/12:33 PM |
The last four lines ring of something beyond the screen, I like that, links, ties, bonds, slavery!
Not in a kinked out way, but deeper.
Cudos lady.
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| Re: A Portrait of Antonio Machado (Edit) by Sasha |
8-Sep-05/12:46 PM |
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I enjoyed this gesture of the traditional. You made me want to bust out my rosary.
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| Re: Insanity by Lifeboatman |
16-Sep-05/10:43 PM |
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| Re: The Death of Many Octopi by tianyi |
16-Sep-05/10:45 PM |
Viceral.
Not more much to say. ARt. subje-C---tiv--v.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Aug-06/4:05 PM |
ludicrousness sounds like ridiculousness and serendipitousness/ hella awkward.
hella- other wise engaging
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| Re: The Pole and the Shadow by Dovina |
20-Aug-06/4:07 PM |
This feels like lightning in a bottle/ pure soliloquy.
vibrant beautiful thank you
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| Re: Jeeves Garcia by Crakyamuni |
21-Aug-06/8:55 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
29-Mar-07/2:48 PM |
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Seems you've taken aninterest since my departure. Look you son a of a bitch, I don't know who you think you are but I think your scum. Most likely an overdated pain in arts asshole, a hemmeroid.
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| Re: walls by Mutant_X |
29-Mar-07/10:19 PM |
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I won't waste another moment on your dribble
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Mar-07/6:38 AM |
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They made a movie about this right? If Ice T listened to Cher all day long and spent most of his time in dank Parisian bathroom stalls in Lieu of his Royalty checks, he wouldn't be Ice T...he'd be M. This poem is bad because you don't care about it, it shows. Could be your impetus though, mysterious. High five.
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| Re: Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe |
19-Feb-08/5:39 PM |
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It feels like a congregational in the church of hippie love, yes!
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