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yet another what if poem

Member since 2005 · Posted 27 May 2005 · 3 comments

What if happiness isn't laughing with friends or making lots of money, what if it isn't even true love or talking to someone for hours under the stars? It might not even be having all of your wildest dreams come true. What if happiness was actually doing things like philosopher - name - dropping, what if happiness was writing a whole bunch of theses, and leaving them to yellow in your attic as a gift to posterity?

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[6] LintyWeenis 27-May-05/10:03 AM Reply
What if, indeed.
[7] Crakyamuni 27-May-05/10:56 AM Reply
I'm still laughing about the name lintyweenis!

ok ok sorry. Happiness is a warm something.

thats it.
[7] Crakyamuni 27-May-05/10:57 AM Reply
5

five
thats it