| Re: a comment on the black light by crwncka1 |
24-May-03/1:38 PM |
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| Re: Sleep of Death by necroscope7 |
24-May-03/11:26 AM |
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I hate it when you go to sleep but it turns out to be a Sleep of Death.
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| Re: a comment on Dear Lord by simone_girard |
24-May-03/6:38 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Symbol Of Love by simone_girard |
24-May-03/6:31 AM |
Let me pass on to you the one thing I've learned about this place. No-one here is exactly what he appears. Not horus8, not Shardik, not nentwined, and not -=Dark_Angel=-. You are though. You're an idiot. Consider this:
1) You could care less what horus8 thinks of your poetry.
2) There is a possible amount of caring lower than the amount you have. (1)
3) You could not care less than not caring at all.
4) There is no possible amount of caring lower than not caring at all (having zero care). (3)
5) The amount you care does not equal zero. (2,4)
6) You care what horus8 thinks of your poetry. (5)
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| Re: a 9,000.00$ Philippine script treatment by Shardik |
23-May-03/9:53 PM |
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I hate anything that contains Spanish-sounding names.
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| Re: I am an genius, and you're a stupid turd by Shardik |
23-May-03/9:52 PM |
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I fear you have again confused -=Dark_Angel=- with beakism. I thought we had got over that misunderstanding. Perhaps you have trouble with the concept because you have so many usernames.
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| Re: a comment on Bombs by Shardik |
23-May-03/9:49 PM |
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What are you talking about? This doesn't say anything about war. It just expresses a vague anti-war sentiment that doesn't have any propositional content. The only function of this haiku is to confirm the prejudices of whoever reads it. It is perfect for the job because it says nothing but it contains the word 'children' so people like you think it must be meaningful.
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| Re: Mother's day on Venus by Shardik |
23-May-03/9:45 PM |
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| Re: a comment on My girl by simone_girard |
23-May-03/8:55 PM |
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Are you some kind of futuristic troll? Why do all your poems rhyme "love" with "above" and use the exact same rhyming and scanning schemes? And who is this mystery publisher? This all sounds like the time I tried to butter myself up and squeeze into the Parson's skirtingboard...
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| Re: the inner flame by crwncka1 |
23-May-03/5:03 PM |
Good grief! If this so-called "inner flame" had anything to do with the enormously long chain of wrong thoughts you must have been thinking in order to produce a poeme as stultifyingly cack as this one, then it should immediately be snuffed out with a giant turnip.
rice / 10
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| Re: a comment on My girl by simone_girard |
23-May-03/4:31 PM |
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Furthermore, "diamondwife", if that is your real pseudonym, I would like to hear your account of what constitutes depth for emotions. If it's anything like your face it will be horribly awry and liable to collapse into a husk of its former self, but I think we should at least air it out before it starts decaying and stinking up the fucking place.
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| Re: a comment on Symbol Of Love by simone_girard |
23-May-03/4:30 PM |
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Really Jeremi, your attempts to emulate my mock-archaic stylings are ill-informed, to say the least. Olden folk wouldn't have called lotion 'lotione'. They would have called it 'Dr Carawax's Orphobismic Ointment'.
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| Re: a comment on My girl by simone_girard |
23-May-03/4:26 PM |
By the way, this poeme is so hideously awful that the only people who could possibly agree to publish it are poetry.com, and the less said about them the better. Actually the more said about them the better.
1. They publish anything you send to them because they want you to buy the book at a ridiculous price.
2. They run poetry competitions to make people think they're good at poetry so they'll buy the poetry books poetry.com constantly secretes.
3. They are gay to the fucking max.
Thanks for your time!
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| Re: a comment on My girl by simone_girard |
23-May-03/4:23 PM |
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Oh come on, diamondwife! You know very well that this poeme is completely ace - it's being published for Christ's sake! I think you're just jealous that simone has found a publisher and are lashing out in frustration at everyone else on poemeranker. Grow up, for pity's sake!
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| Re: Theology by dougsoderstrom |
23-May-03/3:17 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Symbol Of Love by simone_girard |
23-May-03/3:53 AM |
Shut it, horus8. Stop trying to make everyone play by your goddamn rules. Poetry isn't about following rules - it's about beauty and expressing yourself and issues. If simone_girard feels in her heart of hearts that this poeme is a sonnet, then it must be a sonnet.
By the way, simone: great use of "sadness" to rhyme with "gladness"!
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| Re: a comment on Water Runs Deep by shwenatjadeflower |
22-May-03/11:14 AM |
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Yes it is. All beautiful and meaningful poetry starts with "I..." where "..." is replaced with something like "feel", "wonder", "hope", "believe", "cry", "sing", "reach" or "pretend".
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| Re: a comment on Water Runs Deep by shwenatjadeflower |
22-May-03/11:12 AM |
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You lie in bed night after night, wishing people would understand you and your beautiful world, don't you?. God, just shut up. You make me sick.
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| Re: a comment on The Order Of Things by Mr Pig |
22-May-03/10:57 AM |
Well, a lot of people think of me as just a one-dimensional poet who only writes about shallow themes like feces and homelessness. But if you think about it, those are themes that can be very relevant to modern life if portrayed in a mature and responsible way. It's only the people who stop at the surface of my poetry that tend to become angry and confused, when if they'd just open their hearts, they just might find I have some important things to say.
It is indeed sad that we've become so materialistic over the past few years. I remember a time when people cared about core values and simpler truths, but with the advent of violence in the media, and toys made of plastics instead of traditional woods, I truly we feel have lost something important and innocent from the fabric of daily society. Jesu be with you.
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| Re: I'm reserved by Alyssa91 |
22-May-03/7:42 AM |
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I tried to give someone my sprawl once but they just flew upset and started shouting. And as I dangled there uselessly from the secret hole I'd made in the ceiling, my naked body sprawled and vulnerable, clumsily suspended above the mattress like some sort of filthy arachnid, I thought to myself "O Jesu what have I done..."
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