| Re: Lost Dreams by DirtyKurtsGurl |
12-Aug-02/6:42 AM |
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Well fuck me. You're the third person on this site to have a pseudonym ending in 'gurl' and write shitty love poetry.
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| Re: Can't we be together? by Urban Reenchantment |
11-Aug-02/10:02 PM |
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Blah blah I love you you are special we had something special this world isn't good enough for you you mean everything to me blah fucking blah. Good work!
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| Re: brown is the eat feminine deoderant gross and stuff mmm styrofoam right? by skaskowski |
11-Aug-02/9:59 PM |
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If this poem had a more "mature" title, like "Underwater Dreams of the Heart" it would be in the best section. It's vague, meaningless and sentimental enough.
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| Re: I never Knew..... by SkateBoardGurl5799 |
11-Aug-02/9:51 PM |
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| Re: For my darling Lori by Twisted Wizard |
10-Aug-02/2:39 PM |
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P.S I'll thank you to write 'Him' rather than 'him' when referring to Jesus of Nazareth.
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| Re: For my darling Lori by Twisted Wizard |
10-Aug-02/2:34 PM |
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Why not do all three? poemeranker is a great place to meet other Christians and share in fellowship and prayer.
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| Re: For my darling Lori by Twisted Wizard |
10-Aug-02/2:24 PM |
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laughably awful... "The ocean waves do not crash or miss a beat"... what is that supposed to mean? What ocean? Why should ocean waves 'beat'? Is it because 'beat' rhymes with 'feet'? Why should they stop crashing? So what if they do stop crashing? Why do you smell? Is it because you haven't wiped? Is this poeme the 'epitome' of your bum? Why doesn't Jesu feature in any of your poemes? Don't you believe in Jesu? Why not?
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| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
10-Aug-02/2:14 PM |
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Yeah cheers mate! Nice one, livingcanvas! Congrats on being a top notch dullard!
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| Re: I never Knew..... by SkateBoardGurl5799 |
9-Aug-02/3:28 PM |
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blah blah blah I like hanging with friends blah blah and being myself blah blah blah skateboarding blah blah joking around and being a fun person! blah blah blah
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| Re: suicide by durk |
9-Aug-02/3:13 PM |
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why Japan? are they naughty too?
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| Re: Empty by KatieKaBoom |
8-Aug-02/7:12 PM |
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I was wrong. There is something I hate more than kootari. IT'S YOU!!!
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| Re: Quincy Eye by albellisimo |
8-Aug-02/7:11 PM |
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Yeah, quincy eye, whatever the fuck that is. Blah blah! Excellent work
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| Re: Hands. by LucidRevelation |
8-Aug-02/7:10 PM |
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SHUT UP! PLEASE SHUT UP! SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP ABOUT YOUR FUCKING HANDS!
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| Re: ????You tell me????? by kootari |
8-Aug-02/7:10 PM |
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Do you know what I hate more than you, kootari? Nothing. I hate nothing more than you.
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| Re: Lost by Jsylum |
8-Aug-02/5:26 PM |
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Hurt! I cannot rip out the hearts of those who hurt you. I cannot give you their severed heads! But! I can squeeze them for every dime they're worth. Every single dime! I'm Jim 'The HAMMER' Shapiro! You call! I HAMMER!
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| Re: How Much? How Long? by longships |
8-Aug-02/5:25 PM |
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| Re: Highgate Cemetery by longships |
8-Aug-02/5:25 PM |
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Blah blah blah! KILL ME RIPLEY
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| Re: Bastard Of The Bastard by Bachus |
8-Aug-02/5:21 PM |
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I must know more about this vault! Please detail the further exploits of the crippled Oldlings.
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| Re: Love and negotiations by feelinglistless |
8-Aug-02/5:20 PM |
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Poemes must rhyme, Sir. Else they are not poemes, but the foul lies of the Devvil. And loving outside of Marriage is the greatest of all sins! O Jesu what have you done...
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| Re: untitled 2 by yOum|n |
8-Aug-02/4:58 PM |
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As soon as I read the title, I knew this poeme was going to be deep. But I did not realise how deep. It really touched me like no other poeme ever has! The struggle to reach the safety of shore symbolises my own stuggle with obesity. As I stuggle to reach the T.V remote, I am left with two choices: 1) Get up and walk to the remote 2) Eat until I grow so much flab in that direction that I can reach it without moving. My butler is preparing the necessary foods as we speak.
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