Re: For my darling Lori by Twisted Wizard	10-Aug-02/2:24 PM
laughably awful... "The ocean waves do not crash or miss a beat"... what is that supposed to mean? What ocean? Why should ocean waves 'beat'? Is it because 'beat' rhymes with 'feet'? Why should they stop crashing? So what if they do stop crashing? Why do you smell? Is it because you haven't wiped? Is this poeme the 'epitome' of your bum? Why doesn't Jesu feature in any of your poemes? Don't you believe in Jesu? Why not?
Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	10-Aug-02/2:14 PM
Yeah cheers mate! Nice one, livingcanvas! Congrats on being a top notch dullard!
Re: I never Knew..... by SkateBoardGurl5799	9-Aug-02/3:28 PM
blah blah blah I like hanging with friends blah blah and being myself blah blah blah skateboarding blah blah joking around and being a fun person! blah blah blah
Re: suicide by durk	9-Aug-02/3:13 PM
why Japan? are they naughty too?
Re: Empty by KatieKaBoom	8-Aug-02/7:12 PM
I was wrong. There is something I hate more than kootari. IT'S YOU!!!
Re: Quincy Eye by albellisimo	8-Aug-02/7:11 PM
Yeah, quincy eye, whatever the fuck that is. Blah blah! Excellent work
Re: Hands. by LucidRevelation	8-Aug-02/7:10 PM
SHUT UP! PLEASE SHUT UP! SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP ABOUT YOUR FUCKING HANDS!
Re: ????You tell me????? by kootari	8-Aug-02/7:10 PM
Do you know what I hate more than you, kootari? Nothing. I hate nothing more than you.
Re: Lost by Jsylum	8-Aug-02/5:26 PM
Hurt! I cannot rip out the hearts of those who hurt you. I cannot give you their severed heads! But! I can squeeze them for every dime they're worth. Every single dime! I'm Jim 'The HAMMER' Shapiro! You call! I HAMMER!
Re: How Much? How Long? by longships	8-Aug-02/5:25 PM
Several. Many.
Re: Highgate Cemetery by longships	8-Aug-02/5:25 PM
Blah blah blah! KILL ME RIPLEY
Re: Bastard Of The Bastard by Bachus	8-Aug-02/5:21 PM
I must know more about this vault! Please detail the further exploits of the crippled Oldlings.
Re: Love and negotiations by feelinglistless	8-Aug-02/5:20 PM
Poemes must rhyme, Sir. Else they are not poemes, but the foul lies of the Devvil. And loving outside of Marriage is the greatest of all sins! O Jesu what have you done...
Re: untitled 2 by yOum|n	8-Aug-02/4:58 PM
As soon as I read the title, I knew this poeme was going to be deep. But I did not realise how deep. It really touched me like no other poeme ever has! The struggle to reach the safety of shore symbolises my own stuggle with obesity. As I stuggle to reach the T.V remote, I am left with two choices: 1) Get up and walk to the remote 2) Eat until I grow so much flab in that direction that I can reach it without moving. My butler is preparing the necessary foods as we speak.
Re: -=Dark_Angel=- & The Canon Episcopi by Bachus	8-Aug-02/4:23 PM
Could you possibly correct the following confusing mistake I made: "a purely private, therapeutic poem was posted against your wishes" should be "a purely private, therapeutic poem wasn't posted against your wishes". I would be much obliged, Sir.
Re: Joe likes "DYNAMITE"! by horus8	7-Aug-02/7:44 PM
Tsk tsk. This is horus8's birthday surprise, is it? A non-musical version of an already almost too exciting, freely available song... (or should I call it "track" as all us underground DJs do?) Anyway I have a sort of problem with people using names in poems. It always seems to me that using a name in a poem is one of the most smug and lame things you can do. Viz my poem 'A leak in reality'. I should have just said 'his'. Like that FUCKING OFFSPRING SONG 'blah blah blah' (that's not what its' called probably) where it's like "17 shannon is pregnant"...wow, you've really said a lot there by saying that she was called "shannon". It makes it more true and real. To be honest I don't think that's what's going on here. Blah blah I suppose to win your admiration and the replacement of any 'grin's in my name with an 'a' all I have to do is say this poem is great I loved it wow damn good but actually I didn't. I mean there's interesting imagery and then there's just bollocks. Banshees have nothing to do with staying up or drinking mountain dew voodoos all week or .
Re: AT AMSTERDAM STATION FOR FIRST TIME by kawakurdi	7-Aug-02/12:04 PM
I think you'll find that most people in Amsterdam are fairly fluent in English. If you like playing such a self-indulgent game, why not just do it in the U.S.A.? Just stick your tongue into your lower lip and tilt your head a bit when you do it.
Re: Regrets, No More by writteninskin	6-Aug-02/11:06 PM
In particular, "no more does distraction kill me/as I search for love, descending/deeper into sinful dreamings" can easily be read both ways, especially combined with "I have known love from deceivers/but true love's meant for true believers", and your defense of the needy feeling.
Re: Regrets, No More by writteninskin	6-Aug-02/11:03 PM
While earlier you said "there's nothing wrong with wanting to feel needed and loved". Which one is it?"
Re: Lonely by DevilTmptrss	6-Aug-02/10:56 PM
What's the theme here...loneliness? If your aim is to clumsily insinuate that having sex only temporarily removes loneliness, then I suppose you're succeeded. But the moral of the story was so obvious from the start, and so overclimactically stated, that you might as well have left out the last 90% of the poem.