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Hands. (Free verse) by LucidRevelation
My hands. My soft, smooth, eager little girl hands. Ready hands. My ready-to-explore little girl hands. Ready to explore dangerous caves and magical mountains. Ready little girl hands to discover deep valleys and raging rivers. Little girl hands with a desirable destination. Hands with need. Shaky, nervous hands. Excited, curious hands. My hands reach up into the darkness, searching for something to make them complete hands. Focused hands. Knowing hands. My little girl hands touch her hands touch mine, hers, ours. Nervous hands collide. Together our hands make solid, sure hands. Her hands brace mine. Her hands become the bridge to my soul. My sweaty, passionate little girl hands wait silently. Her hands lead my small, naive little girl hands to her naked breasts. Little girl hands become strong adult hands. Intent little girls-adult hands feel hearts beating. Hearts beating quickly, fast, growing. Listen. Hands entangled, little girls adult hands and hers.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1
Weighted score: 5.0952573
Overall Rank: 6103
Posted: May 11, 2002 11:31 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 11:31 AM PDT
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Comments:
[8] gregg333 @ 66.57.233.142 | 14-Jul-02/11:30 AM | Reply
passionate
[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 22-Jul-02/4:34 PM | Reply
Tell me more about your hands. i have a refined doll-fetish. is all seriousness i luv this poem it's poignantly supernatural and divine
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.57.161 | 22-Jul-02/4:42 PM | Reply
I wish I had hand(s) instead of these cumbersome trotters! Great poeme!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 8-Aug-02/7:10 PM | Reply
SHUT UP! PLEASE SHUT UP! SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP ABOUT YOUR FUCKING HANDS!
[4] nentwined @ 192.168.0.69 | 9-Aug-02/12:06 AM | Reply
that's some intense child porn you've got there. fairly well written, but... is that really what you were going for?
[7] Owner of the Sky @ 61.9.0.98 | 1-Oct-02/12:38 AM | Reply
I like it very much my hardcore-superstar. :o) She's really inspired you a lot hasn't she? And nentwined, it's not kiddie porn. Silly. :op
[9] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 1-Oct-02/7:39 AM | Reply
As a gentleman I feel I should look the other way while you girls get on with it...
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