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An Awaited and Long Deserved Spring (Ode) by <Wankster>
To keep it all inside… Is to deny the bird its right to sing, The flower bloom and blossom bring, The snow to melt and cold to hide, Setting the stage and paying homage To an awaited and well-deserved spring.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6113
Posted: April 6, 2004 4:33 PM PDT; Last modified: April 6, 2004 4:34 PM PDT
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[7] deleted user @ 68.66.196.168 | 6-Apr-04/6:32 PM | Reply
I don't see how keeping it all inside causes all these happenings.
[n/a] <Wankster> @ 24.168.25.13 > deleted user | 14-Apr-04/7:42 PM | Reply
The "keeping it inside" is the year keeping spring inside and prolonging winter. I guess you have to live where it's still cold and winter-like in weather during mid-April to understand what it truly means.
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