regarding some deleted poem...	20-Jun-02/4:51 PM
Perhaps that's because you're a moron.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Jun-02/4:55 PM
I find it hard to believe you actually think this is serious angst poetry. And even if it was, you didn't even make a contentful comment. You just expressed the well-known and universally-agreed-on sentiment that serious angst poetry is usually bad. You must be some sort of expert commentator or something.
Re: Walls by razorgrin	24-Jun-02/1:29 PM
Does a stone wall stop a blind woman as surely as one who sees?
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jul-02/3:46 AM
Indeed you do need to take a bath. A bath to cleanse your sin-stained spirit from the gayness that has obviously corrupted it. I will pray for thee my child... "Thou shalt not lie with a man as one lies with a woman; it is an abomination." Lev 18:22
Re: Sonnet For a Porn Star by mikejedw	8-Jul-02/5:27 PM
Similar to one I'm working on - so I appreciate the effort you've put into this. But why does the first line have 12 syllables?
Re: Through the eyes of life by Angel_of_fait	9-Jul-02/3:49 AM
Jeepers. This poeme is amazing. It really made me see through the eyes of life. Most 14 year old kids from Texas are among the most dangerously stupid individuals in the world. But you are completely different! Great job!
Re: trapoide by Angel_of_fait	9-Jul-02/3:56 AM
Beautiful..."people who shrug life, hug life and even sometimes mug life"... sheer genius. You know, people do sometimes mug life. It's an important issue which you have tackled with breathtaking clarity. Are you a pro?
Re: just like the jagged dagger by Angel_of_fait	9-Jul-02/4:06 AM
You know, I read this poeme and thought: I am also just like the jagged dagger "sliceing" my life away.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/4:18 AM
You ask if it wrong to think of a song while pissing. Indeed it is wrong. "Thou shalt not have impure thoughts while passing water; it is wickedness." Lev 18:23
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/7:28 AM
Mexico is the dirtiest of all countries.
Re: To the Sea by timfowler	9-Jul-02/7:29 AM
While you, Sir, may hope for the breaking of tides deeper and unblessed from the salt-crust lips, I hope merely for the breaking of wind richer and unsmelt from the brown-crust cheeks. Good day.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/7:40 AM
Great poeme! I love the way you've thought about a collection of vague thoughts, feelings and emotions and stuck them after "I want you".
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/7:54 AM
"...charming tongue" - beautiful.
Re: Harry the Moon by Mimi & Vincent	9-Jul-02/7:58 AM
My tumor gives me great pride. Thought I do agree that monies and stati make one's blind. Great line by the way.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/10:28 AM
I would prefer to have no liver than to have read this poem.
Re: My Tongue ..... and God by BadPoet	9-Jul-02/2:54 PM
O Jesu! I dare not think what would happen if you wrote erotic fiction. Delightful play-off of anatomy and religion!!!!!!!!!!
Re: pinky swear by crin	9-Jul-02/2:55 PM
It's called the handbrake, my love. And to think you call yourself a car expert...
Re: lurcher for lunch - for James Kelman by roy rocket	9-Jul-02/2:56 PM
I would have preferred it if you had included the word 'chin' somewhere.
Re: Fascination by ObiWonKn	9-Jul-02/2:57 PM
Well that's certainly a unique experience! Perhaps you would like to share your experiences of other things nobody has ever experienced before? I'm sure you have some powerful things to say about unrequited love!!
Re: Let me let me go by Eric Johnson	9-Jul-02/2:58 PM
I once used a doily for a non-recommended purpose. That was unpleasant for everyone involved!