replying on Monsters by raven_the_poet
3 Apr 2006, 2:16 PM
Thank you ^_^
replying on Monsters by raven_the_poet
2 Apr 2006, 1:44 PM
I'll try to edit some later if I get a better idea.
Thanks for the comment.
Thanks for the comment.
replying on Monsters by raven_the_poet
1 Apr 2006, 2:57 PM
Thanks for the criticism.
I would, however, like to point out that I am only thirteen, and the entire poem was not done by me ;)
I would, however, like to point out that I am only thirteen, and the entire poem was not done by me ;)
on The Considerate Lover by Tascobar
1 Apr 2006, 2:14 PM
Haha.
on Today's Spam by nentwined
1 Apr 2006, 2:13 PM
i love this =)
on Behind the storm clouds, the moon consoles the sun.(edited) by ALChemy
1 Apr 2006, 1:56 PM
I don't know why people are being so rude about this poem.
I love it, and I always have liked anything about the heavenly bodies.
Nice work ^^
I love it, and I always have liked anything about the heavenly bodies.
Nice work ^^
replying on Pancakes by raven_the_poet
22 Feb 2006, 5:32 PM
^_^
replying on Home is Where the Hate Is by raven_the_poet
22 Feb 2006, 5:29 PM
Chorus:
At home, itâs a constant rage,
No time to make room for your own flesh and blood.
But once again,
You cry in the darkness,
Try not to let him hear you screaming.
At home, itâs a constant rage,
No time to make room for your own flesh and blood.
But once again,
You cry in the darkness,
Try not to let him hear you screaming.
replying on Home is Where the Hate Is by raven_the_poet
22 Feb 2006, 5:28 PM
Yeah, I'm not going to change anything because it's a song, but thanks lol. I think it sounds fine, and if I plan on using it as a poem anytime soon, I'll take your suggestions into consideration.
replying on Pancakes by raven_the_poet
20 Feb 2006, 5:06 PM
Lol. thanks for the comment.
replying on Escape by raven_the_poet
14 Feb 2006, 7:21 PM
Thanks, I'll practice a bit with that. I always thought it sounded strange.
replying on Escape by raven_the_poet
14 Feb 2006, 7:20 PM
?
replying on Escape by raven_the_poet
14 Feb 2006, 7:18 PM
thanks, he's my buddy.
replying on Winter Wonderland by raven_the_poet
14 Feb 2006, 7:17 PM
I wrote it a long time ago.. I dunno.. any suggestions?
on She Doesn't Love Me. by edgar-allen-poe-rox
14 Feb 2006, 10:37 AM
=)
on Down on Dogs by Bobjim
14 Feb 2006, 10:34 AM
Wow. hahaha you are a wonderful poet
on Dear flatulance (dear lord) by Bobjim
14 Feb 2006, 10:29 AM
omg. freaking hilarious. XD
replying on Escape by raven_the_poet
14 Feb 2006, 10:23 AM
that's not my first, my first is called When It Snows. You can go to poetry.com and search my name to read it.
on Tears. by edgar-allen-poe-rox
14 Feb 2006, 10:20 AM
You rock jamie -glomp-
<3