| Re: Kristi's Quiescence by matt door |
4-Apr-06/5:28 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Monsters by raven_the_poet |
3-Apr-06/2:16 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Monsters by raven_the_poet |
2-Apr-06/1:44 PM |
I'll try to edit some later if I get a better idea.
Thanks for the comment.
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| Re: a comment on Monsters by raven_the_poet |
1-Apr-06/2:57 PM |
Thanks for the criticism.
I would, however, like to point out that I am only thirteen, and the entire poem was not done by me ;)
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| Re: The Considerate Lover by Tascobar |
1-Apr-06/2:14 PM |
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| Re: Today's Spam by nentwined |
1-Apr-06/2:13 PM |
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| Re: Behind the storm clouds, the moon consoles the sun.(edited) by ALChemy |
1-Apr-06/1:56 PM |
I don't know why people are being so rude about this poem.
I love it, and I always have liked anything about the heavenly bodies.
Nice work ^^
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| Re: a comment on Pancakes by raven_the_poet |
22-Feb-06/5:32 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Home is Where the Hate Is by raven_the_poet |
22-Feb-06/5:29 PM |
Chorus:
At home, itâs a constant rage,
No time to make room for your own flesh and blood.
But once again,
You cry in the darkness,
Try not to let him hear you screaming.
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| Re: a comment on Home is Where the Hate Is by raven_the_poet |
22-Feb-06/5:28 PM |
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Yeah, I'm not going to change anything because it's a song, but thanks lol. I think it sounds fine, and if I plan on using it as a poem anytime soon, I'll take your suggestions into consideration.
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| Re: a comment on Pancakes by raven_the_poet |
20-Feb-06/5:06 PM |
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Lol. thanks for the comment.
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| Re: a comment on Escape by raven_the_poet |
14-Feb-06/7:21 PM |
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Thanks, I'll practice a bit with that. I always thought it sounded strange.
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| Re: a comment on Escape by raven_the_poet |
14-Feb-06/7:20 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Escape by raven_the_poet |
14-Feb-06/7:18 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Winter Wonderland by raven_the_poet |
14-Feb-06/7:17 PM |
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I wrote it a long time ago.. I dunno.. any suggestions?
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| Re: She Doesn't Love Me. by edgar-allen-poe-rox |
14-Feb-06/10:37 AM |
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| Re: Down on Dogs by Bobjim |
14-Feb-06/10:34 AM |
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Wow. hahaha you are a wonderful poet
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| Re: Dear flatulance (dear lord) by Bobjim |
14-Feb-06/10:29 AM |
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omg. freaking hilarious. XD
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| Re: a comment on Escape by raven_the_poet |
14-Feb-06/10:23 AM |
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that's not my first, my first is called When It Snows. You can go to poetry.com and search my name to read it.
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| Re: Tears. by edgar-allen-poe-rox |
14-Feb-06/10:20 AM |
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