Re: a comment on Come Home Soon by Sunshine Conkey |
29-Aug-05/4:32 PM |
When I read your reply...i hugged my son(12yrs) for me and for you...I will light a candle for you in hopes of his safe return...:) Bethy
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Re: a comment on The Stone Man by Bethy |
29-Aug-05/12:44 PM |
Thanks for the compliment...nine inch nails,i clued in later lol...this is actually a part of a song i wrote for my brother...:) Bethy
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Re: a comment on The Stone Man by Bethy |
29-Aug-05/12:38 PM |
I wish I was young...lol...pushing the big 40 on the 7th of next month...yikes...Nine Inch Nails...sorry 'bout that...I was suffering from a brain fart!!...now I'm better...lol... and thanks for your comments :) Bethy
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Re: Out of a White Hole by ALChemy |
29-Aug-05/11:12 AM |
Ahhh...is that what it looks like in there...excellent...:) Bethy
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Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy |
29-Aug-05/10:43 AM |
love your ideas...I will edit and re-post...I actually hit his car with the carton...lol...and thanks...I am glad you like it...:) Bethy
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Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy |
29-Aug-05/10:36 AM |
Thanks...glad you like it...it was fun to write...will be making a few changes, including yours...:) Bethy
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Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy |
29-Aug-05/10:33 AM |
Darkangel...I went to reply to your comments and deleted it...ARG!!!...anyhow...thanks for your comments...my mouse is now a UFO...hehehe...:)Bethy
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Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy |
29-Aug-05/10:28 AM |
it sure does...thanks for your comments...:) Bethy
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Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy |
29-Aug-05/10:26 AM |
it sure does...and thanks for your comments...got a few changes to make...and will be re-posting...tell me what ya think...:) Bethy
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Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy |
29-Aug-05/10:23 AM |
incerting head in bag now... lol...hiccups will vanish before yer eyes...lol...and thanks...:) Bethy
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Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy |
29-Aug-05/10:20 AM |
Thanks a whole bunch Dovina, I agree, those few lines do stand out don't they...Alchemy suggested a few changes..I really like them...and will edit and re-post...:) Bethy
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Re: American Semele (Edit) by Sasha |
26-Aug-05/7:16 PM |
This is a favorite...*10* :) Bethy
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Re: Crisscrossing My Mind by woodstock20000 |
26-Aug-05/7:11 PM |
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Re: Come Home Soon by Sunshine Conkey |
26-Aug-05/7:02 PM |
Goose bumps...*10* the last two verse are my favs...:) Bethy
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Re: Heaven is an uninspired piece of art by Enkidu |
26-Aug-05/6:59 PM |
I really like this...it sings...it flows...:) Bethy
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Re: Apollinaire: Mirabeau Bridge by Sasha |
26-Aug-05/6:56 PM |
Days go by me yet I stay...I like this line...This is enchanting...I can see this poem...:) Bethy *9*
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Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy |
26-Aug-05/6:01 PM |
Thanks Bobjim...It is true...its why I am a single mom bringing up two little darlins on my own...:) Bethy
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Re: a comment on The Big Stupid Dink :) :) by Bethy |
25-Aug-05/3:01 PM |
Thank you soooo much Zodiac...I see exactly what you mean...hence the new poem...your advice open something up inside me...stick to the topic and feel it...good words of wisdom...:) Bethy
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Re: i was an ass by hendrimike |
25-Aug-05/1:15 PM |
one nighters look just like that...lol :) Bethy
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Re: Lessons(revised) by bellafuego |
25-Aug-05/1:13 PM |
I have said it a thousands times...Life is the longest thing we have! good poem...:) Bethy
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