on Field of dreams by smilja_trenu...
16 Jul 2002, 8:37 AM
I hate when 'passionate' is misspelled
on The Lost Laugh by Roisin
16 Jul 2002, 2:48 PM
It's behind the couch. Next to the remote.
on My Zaftig Sea Nymph by waltfreakinwhitman
15 Jul 2002, 4:09 PM
This poem was just for you, razorgrin.
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 1:38 PM
why must you get all Joey Lawrence on me?
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2002, 7:28 PM
Great first line, +3. Stra Trek reference, presumably, -7.
on some deleted poem
21 Aug 2002, 9:55 AM
Babbit11 -- Thanks for acknowledging my work and the inspiration you derive from it. I'd like to thank my manager, my accountant, Louie, the good folks at poemranker, and of course, L. Ron Hubbard, and Jesu (whose love and guidance make all things possible). I'd also like to thank my understanding and patient wife (hey, boo), my girlfriend Luquanda (thanks for keeping it on the down-low), and my crew from the Bronx (Tamika, Shaniqua, Lashaun, Rayshawn, Rae-Rae, and Norbert)...whoa, there's the music. That's my time. I love you all!! Peace
on Exquisite Explosion by Venus
20 Aug 2002, 11:27 AM
Nice alliteration. Did you have to discard 'creamy custard' or 'manly molasses' before arriving at 'condensed milk confetti'?
on Enslaved by Twisted Wizard
15 Aug 2002, 4:13 PM
Having one verse that rhymes and the rest in freeverse is extraordinary. And your non-meandering exploration of free-will vs. destiny has never been done before. Keep up the good work!
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2002, 4:22 PM
Finest poem about an electric guitar I've ever seen. TEN!!
on some deleted poem
5 Aug 2002, 3:28 PM
I liked the last line. Reminiscent of your poem 'The Turd to End All Turds' being a blatant ripoff of my timeless haiku, 'The Call of Duty.'
on Thinkin of ya! by KezzY20
1 Aug 2002, 12:15 PM
This poem is so awful, I just gouged my own eyes out. With a spoon. If I never see another poem like this again, then it was well worth it.
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 10:49 AM
Such a sweet, tender poem. You get an 8.
on I Hate You by mytenderrage
30 Jul 2002, 11:03 AM
I thought it profound and insightful. I am shamed into reconsidering my own body of work, most of which involves nature and my sweaty scrotum. TEN!!
on some deleted poem
18 Jul 2002, 9:19 AM
This is the only poem of yours that doesn't suck that much dick. Kudos.
on Unfortunate Semen Incident by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
17 Jul 2002, 9:52 AM
You deserve an 'embrowning.'
on some deleted poem
16 Jul 2002, 11:57 AM
I strongly identify with this poem. You haven't loved until you've known the love of a Hoover. TEN.
on Earthly Delights? by razorgrin
15 Jul 2002, 3:11 PM
Cheery stuff, Sunshine. I've got 2 words for you: PRO-ZAC.
on Unfortunate Semen Incident by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
15 Jul 2002, 3:19 PM
Nice job, but by no stretch of the imagination does 'bukkake' rhyme with 'hierarchy.'
on (untitled) by Mystifying
15 Jul 2002, 3:22 PM
Excellent work<BR>. I have no idea<BR> what this is about <BR> but I am inexplicably moved <BR>.