poemranker ::20 most recent comments by waltfreakinwhitman (21-40)

Comments bywaltfreakinwhitman, 21–40 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 15 Jul 2002, 2:46 PM
This poem makes my sack itch. TEN!!
on some deleted poem 30 May 2002, 12:28 PM
Nice use of archaic spelling. And capitalizing 'privates' was a nice touch. Well strophed.
on some deleted poem 30 May 2002, 12:56 PM
I find dog crap.
on some deleted poem 30 May 2002, 12:20 PM
Elegant and poised. This is your finest work yet.
on some deleted poem 30 May 2002, 10:47 AM
I've never seen 'fuckface' used in a poem. You're a true visionary.
on some deleted poem 30 May 2002, 12:31 PM
very powerful stuff. 10.
on some deleted poem 15 Jul 2002, 8:48 AM
Excellent title. The nut-kicking theme warms the heart.
on Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman 18 Jun 2002, 4:33 PM
Thanks. I like to call this Beat Poetry.
on Gastric Sadness by waltfreakinwhitman 14 Jul 2002, 3:54 PM
Thanks. The Haiku form is pretty unforgiving. So I decided to expand the form with my use of the asterisk. This allows me to add crucial information to the poem that would otherwise be lost.
on Fragrant Blossom by Jody Conn 14 Jul 2002, 1:34 PM
'fragrant hips?!'
on This Is Just to Say by waltfreakinwhitman 17 Jun 2002, 12:39 PM
No, WCW stole from me.
on some deleted poem 18 Jun 2002, 4:26 PM
I have no idea what you're talking about. But I give you a 10.
on chuck by roses are read 30 May 2002, 10:36 AM
Up-Chuck would be a more appropriate title.
on chuck by roses are read 30 May 2002, 10:36 AM
Up-Chuck would have been a more appropriate title.
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on some deleted poem 30 May 2002, 1:13 PM
Learn the Haiku form
It's a knick knack paddy whack
Give the dog a bone
on some deleted poem 12 May 2002, 10:18 AM
Excellent transaction. A credit to the Ebay community. A++++++++
on some deleted poem 18 Jun 2002, 4:46 PM
The line numbers were the best part of this poem.