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Fragrant Blossom

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 17 comments

With swollen scented pouting petals And nectar for my lips A wonderful wine a flowing fountain From soft and fragrant hips Spread for me this turgid flower This exquisite and lovely sight So I may freely drink its honey Sweet musky bloom of night jc062001

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17 comments

[1] anonymous 22-Jun-01/1:36 PM Reply

ooh. I think I like this one better than "To Kiss", though that one's line about "any hour" is yummy

[1] anonymous 22-Jun-01/3:12 PM Reply

despite the fact that the metaphor is worn out, you execute well.

[1] anonymous 26-Jun-01/5:50 PM Reply

Too damn sexy!

[1] anonymous 27-Jun-01/6:38 PM Reply

wow, that's a hot one, I can actually feel your lips, I like!!

[1] anonymous 29-Jun-01/12:52 PM Reply

very hot, thanks

[1] anonymous 18-Jul-01/10:33 PM Reply

Sensual.

[1] anonymous 9-Sep-01/5:48 PM Reply

captivating and sensual...

[1] anonymous 17-Sep-01/11:08 AM Reply

mmmmmmmmmmm, yum.

[n/a] notule 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply

A wonderful whine in an imperative language

[1] anonymous 28-Apr-02/10:08 PM Reply

charming bloom
men's delight
great write

[9] nentwined 10-May-02/9:19 AM Reply

yum. =) the first line says it all, but the supporting lines are tasty as well.

[n/a] razorgrin 20-Jun-02/7:51 AM Reply

Sextacular.My everything curled up purring..

[5] deleted user 12-Jul-02/8:27 AM Reply

Sounds like love

[0] waltfreakinwhitman 14-Jul-02/1:34 PM Reply

'fragrant hips?!'

[9] Win 22-Jul-02/11:04 PM Reply

Beautiful, sensuous, romantic

[9] Sigh'ense... 31-Jul-02/10:08 AM Reply

this should be printed on condom packages to increase sales, cuz DAMN! It's just lovely enough...Da1 w/ no lubrication --smile--

[10] ==Doylum 1-Aug-02/2:03 PM Reply

Naughty dirty naughty poem, so naughty.
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