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Fragrant Blossom (Free verse) by Jody Conn With swollen scented pouting petals
And nectar for my lips
A wonderful
wine a flowing fountain
From soft and fragrant hips
Spread for me this
turgid flower
This exquisite and lovely sight
So I may freely drink its
honey
Sweet musky bloom of night
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.882353 Overall Rank: 1529 Comments:
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22-Jun-01/1:36 PM
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ooh. I think I like this one better than "To Kiss", though that one's line about "any hour" is yummy
despite the fact that the metaphor is worn out, you execute well.
Too damn sexy!
wow, that's a hot one, I can actually feel your lips, I like!!
very hot, thanks
Sensual.
captivating and sensual...
mmmmmmmmmmm, yum.
charming bloom
men's delight great write
Sextacular.My everything curled up purring..
Sounds like love
'fragrant hips?!'
Beautiful, sensuous, romantic
this should be printed on condom packages to increase sales, cuz DAMN! It's just lovely enough...Da1 w/ no lubrication --smile--
Naughty dirty naughty poem, so naughty.
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