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Re: Earthly Delights? by razorgrin 15-Jul-02/3:11 PM
Cheery stuff, Sunshine. I've got 2 words for you: PRO-ZAC.
Re: Infection by bluwiz 15-Jul-02/3:13 PM
You two deserve each other.
Re: Unfortunate Semen Incident by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15-Jul-02/3:19 PM
Nice job, but by no stretch of the imagination does 'bukkake' rhyme with 'hierarchy.'
Re: (untitled) by Mystifying 15-Jul-02/3:22 PM
Excellent work<BR>. I have no idea<BR> what this is about <BR> but I am inexplicably moved <BR>.
Re: My Zaftig Sea Nymph by waltfreakinwhitman 15-Jul-02/4:09 PM
This poem was just for you, razorgrin.
Re: Field of dreams by smilja_trenu... 16-Jul-02/8:37 AM
I hate when 'passionate' is misspelled
regarding some deleted poem... 16-Jul-02/11:57 AM
I strongly identify with this poem. You haven't loved until you've known the love of a Hoover. TEN.
Re: The Lost Laugh by Roisin 16-Jul-02/2:48 PM
It's behind the couch. Next to the remote.
Re: Unfortunate Semen Incident by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 17-Jul-02/9:52 AM
You deserve an 'embrowning.'
regarding some deleted poem... 18-Jul-02/9:19 AM
This is the only poem of yours that doesn't suck that much dick. Kudos.
regarding some deleted poem... 30-Jul-02/10:49 AM
Such a sweet, tender poem. You get an 8.
Re: I Hate You by mytenderrage 30-Jul-02/11:03 AM
I thought it profound and insightful. I am shamed into reconsidering my own body of work, most of which involves nature and my sweaty scrotum. TEN!!
Re: Thinkin of ya! by KezzY20 1-Aug-02/12:15 PM
This poem is so awful, I just gouged my own eyes out. With a spoon. If I never see another poem like this again, then it was well worth it.
regarding some deleted poem... 5-Aug-02/3:28 PM
I liked the last line. Reminiscent of your poem 'The Turd to End All Turds' being a blatant ripoff of my timeless haiku, 'The Call of Duty.'
Re: Enslaved by Twisted Wizard 15-Aug-02/4:13 PM
Having one verse that rhymes and the rest in freeverse is extraordinary. And your non-meandering exploration of free-will vs. destiny has never been done before. Keep up the good work!
regarding some deleted poem... 15-Aug-02/4:22 PM
Finest poem about an electric guitar I've ever seen. TEN!!
Re: Exquisite Explosion by Venus 20-Aug-02/11:27 AM
Nice alliteration. Did you have to discard 'creamy custard' or 'manly molasses' before arriving at 'condensed milk confetti'?
regarding some deleted poem... 21-Aug-02/9:55 AM
Babbit11 -- Thanks for acknowledging my work and the inspiration you derive from it. I'd like to thank my manager, my accountant, Louie, the good folks at poemranker, and of course, L. Ron Hubbard, and Jesu (whose love and guidance make all things possible). I'd also like to thank my understanding and patient wife (hey, boo), my girlfriend Luquanda (thanks for keeping it on the down-low), and my crew from the Bronx (Tamika, Shaniqua, Lashaun, Rayshawn, Rae-Rae, and Norbert)...whoa, there's the music. That's my time. I love you all!! Peace
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Sep-02/1:38 PM
why must you get all Joey Lawrence on me?
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Sep-02/7:28 PM
Great first line, +3. Stra Trek reference, presumably, -7.


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