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Thinkin of ya! (Free verse) by KezzY20 I MET YOU NOT TOO LONG AGO.
SOMETHING MADE ME WANT TO KNOW
SOMEONE LIKE YOU TO TOUCH AND HOLD.
I THOUGHT ABOUT YOU FOR ENDLESS HOURS,
PICTURING YOU HOLDING FLOWERS
AND HUGS AND KISSES I WOULD SHOWER.
YOU WOULD TAKE ME TO MY FAVORITE PLACE,
THE ONE WITH ALL THE FRILLY LACE,
AND DANCE ALL NIGHT IN EACH OTHER'S ARMS,
FOR YOU KEEP ME FROM HARM
WITH YOU ADORING EYES
AND YOUR SUBTLE CHARMS.
I THOUGHT WHAT IT WOULD BE LIKE TO KNOW YOUR
HEART.
WOULD YOU LET ME HOLD IT HERE IN THE DARK?
WOULD WE NEVER BE APART?
THEN I THOUGHT HOW IT WOULD FEEL
TO KNOW SOMEONE LOVED ME
AND KEPT IT REAL.
I AM ALWAYS DREAMING OF THAT ONE SPECIAL DAY
WHEN WE MEET AND YOU CHASE MY BLUES AWAY.
BUT FOR NOW I AM THINKING OF YOU.
Up the ladder:
Me and the Darkness
Down the ladder:
Bedside Angel
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.125
Posted: August 1, 2002 10:54 AM PDT; Last modified: August 1, 2002 10:54 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.4957347 Overall Rank: 12829 Comments:
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1-Aug-02/10:59 AM
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PLEASE. STOP. NOW. BEFORE SOMEONE GETS HURT.
why do you KEEP writing this crap?just sit in the dark and masturbate like the others like yourself.
This poem is so awful, I just gouged my own eyes out. With a spoon. If I never see another poem like this again, then it was well worth it.
For the fact that you typed this poem i'm giving you 2, it is too naive.
This could have only been written by someone in love
nice sentiments..prepsre for bashing comments from others
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