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Thinkin of ya! (Free verse) by KezzY20

I MET YOU NOT TOO LONG AGO. SOMETHING MADE ME WANT TO KNOW SOMEONE LIKE YOU TO TOUCH AND HOLD. I THOUGHT ABOUT YOU FOR ENDLESS HOURS, PICTURING YOU HOLDING FLOWERS AND HUGS AND KISSES I WOULD SHOWER. YOU WOULD TAKE ME TO MY FAVORITE PLACE, THE ONE WITH ALL THE FRILLY LACE, AND DANCE ALL NIGHT IN EACH OTHER'S ARMS, FOR YOU KEEP ME FROM HARM WITH YOU ADORING EYES AND YOUR SUBTLE CHARMS. I THOUGHT WHAT IT WOULD BE LIKE TO KNOW YOUR HEART. WOULD YOU LET ME HOLD IT HERE IN THE DARK? WOULD WE NEVER BE APART? THEN I THOUGHT HOW IT WOULD FEEL TO KNOW SOMEONE LOVED ME AND KEPT IT REAL. I AM ALWAYS DREAMING OF THAT ONE SPECIAL DAY WHEN WE MEET AND YOU CHASE MY BLUES AWAY. BUT FOR NOW I AM THINKING OF YOU.

Amelia 1-Aug-02/12:39 PM
For the fact that you typed this poem i'm giving you 2, it is too naive.




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