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Gastric Sadness (Haiku) by waltfreakinwhitman Four-piece lunch combo*
Ordered with extra hot sauce
Tonight, I'll crap fire
*Mixed dark meat & white meat, w/biscuit, curly fries (spicy) and medium
Pepsi. $3.99 with coupon.
Up the ladder:
This Is The Sound of My Heart Breaking
Down the ladder:
demiurge
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.7
Posted: July 14, 2002 2:05 PM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2002 2:05 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.85 Overall Rank: 1568 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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14-Jul-02/2:19 PM
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The astrik side note is high-style, and cutet
Thanks. The Haiku form is pretty unforgiving. So I decided to expand the form with my use of the asterisk. This allows me to add crucial information to the poem that would otherwise be lost.
Didnt like it that ,uch, but I gave you an 8 just for your user name
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