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Gastric Sadness (Haiku) by waltfreakinwhitman

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waltfreakinwhitman 14-Jul-02/3:54 PM
Thanks. The Haiku form is pretty unforgiving. So I decided to expand the form with my use of the asterisk. This allows me to add crucial information to the poem that would otherwise be lost.




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