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1-Jun-05/6:04 PM |
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Definitely a 10. Good use of words and i fin it very powerful. Keep the good work up!!
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| Re: Soldier by kev_wannabe |
3-Jun-05/8:56 PM |
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I find this dull. You can do betta.
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4-Jun-05/5:40 PM |
Quite nice...runs smoothly but with some rough edges.
*8*
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| Re: untitled by Spitfire07 |
4-Jun-05/5:46 PM |
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Cool lyrics...by the way..thanks for the 10:)!!
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| Re: Lost by Spitfire07 |
4-Jun-05/7:00 PM |
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I like the rhyming in the poem. It really enhanced the fact that you're trying to tell the readers how this person is lost. Keep up the good work^^!!
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6-Jun-05/4:37 PM |
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Oopz...a typo there. Thanks for reminding me! I will be more cautious next time.
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| Re: Snow by lil_evil_boi |
7-Jun-05/10:17 AM |
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Due to the huge "discussion" and disagreement about the poem 'Faith', I decide to delete the poem to prevent further misunderstanding.
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| Re: Snow by lil_evil_boi |
7-Jun-05/7:43 PM |
I absolutely didnt know about the 'Faith' poem in the Bible until numerous poeple bagan to discuss about this so called "plagiarized quote". And I'm not bluffing. This quote, or verse, derived from my father. When I was small, he used to always remind me of this verse. And tells me that the three most important qualities of a human are faith, confidence, and honesty. Also at that point all of the family members, including me, were atheists. We had no clue that this quote may be from some other text. As for where my father got this quote, he never told me. If this clarifies some of the disagreements and wonders, it's my pleasure to explain to the readers. Hopefuly this'll clear things up. Thanks.
PS(If you still think that I plagiarized this verse from the bible, and the whole story is just an excuse, I have nothing to say. Go ahead and believe what you think. I've shared the whole story related to this verse and if this didnt help, sorry.)
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| Re: Dreams by lil_evil_boi |
7-Jun-05/8:02 PM |
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Hopefully this poem wont cause another "discussion" again. Anyways, I dont really think the title is suitable for the poem so I need some ideas. Thanks~
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| Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike |
7-Jun-05/8:08 PM |
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Hi. Just curious, where did you get the lyrics from? What song? I find the lyrics touching. Somehow. <7>
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| Re: Life by sacred_poet_me |
8-Jun-05/6:45 PM |
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Sentimentally touching. It really taught me what life truly means. The words flowed smoothly, and the repetition of the word 'life' really enhanced the poem. My favourite part is when how s_p_m described the reminders by using the spectrum. It sounded really nicely. Also the ending was spectacular. âOne minute Iâm here, and the next Iâm gone. Into another dimension of darkness.âHe really portrayed death in an impressive and dramatic way. Nice wordplay.
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| Re: Oh by sacred_poet_me |
8-Jun-05/6:47 PM |
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Nice song but I think it's a bit lengthy. -7-
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| Re: Impeccable mess by sk8rs_rule_all |
15-Jun-05/4:39 PM |
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Hmm...quite a lengthy poem there. It's like a short stroy. O well...I guess different poets have their unique ways to present their poems. And apparently your one of them. Perhaps try putting this "paragraph-like" poem into individual sentences? Maybe that'll make it more appealing and facinating. Just a suggestion. -6-
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| Re: Auto-bio Poem by sacred_poet_me |
15-Jun-05/7:48 PM |
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Descriptive and imaginative. Great. -8-
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| Re: Love by untamed_fierce |
16-Jun-05/8:00 PM |
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True. But you can stop by hating someone.
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| Re: Naughty Poems (R) by untamed_fierce |
16-Jun-05/8:01 PM |
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| Re: Special Place by untamed_fierce |
16-Jun-05/8:44 PM |
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Let me guess...a library?
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16-Jun-05/9:05 PM |
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I think it's actually quite enjoyable...good job.
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