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untitled (Lyric) by Spitfire07
Take it to the top Spin it around And watch it drop Misconceptions of deceptions Lies fly above the street Above the people flows their deceit This is what we have become To this day We still go astray Let it go Let the lies flow down Soon someone's goin' to know your fault Trying to catch your lies floating around To late They've touched the ground The truth has come out And there's no where to run You stick out your lip And Pout But your nightmare Has only just begun

Up the ladder: iPod
Down the ladder: Cancer

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4918
Posted: June 4, 2005 3:43 PM PDT; Last modified: June 4, 2005 3:43 PM PDT
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[9] lil_evil_boi @ 70.68.76.244 | 4-Jun-05/5:46 PM | Reply
Cool lyrics...by the way..thanks for the 10:)!!
[n/a] Spitfire07 @ 172.132.8.25 > lil_evil_boi | 4-Jun-05/5:52 PM | Reply
No prob, i really liked it!
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